When you consider the curved plastic on the helmets,
leather gloves, jackets, pants, etc they really do defy the sun.

Great fic, I think it should be a little longer though.

Nice o/s, very atmospheric.

Although for me it's hard to believe that Alice could go on a trip with only a small bag tied to a motorbike ;)

xx

Jasper only imagine on a bike I'll melt all over. I liked the one-short, continues to write.

I love Alice and Jasper, thanks for writing this!

P.S. "Awkward" was really funny, I always wondered what Tanya and company would give Edward and Bella ... ;)

Short and sweet but it really captured a playful (and sexy!) moment between Alice and Jasper.

I liked the last paragraph about the sunlight. I'm glad someone is using the Ducati, it would be a crying shame for it to stay in the garage. M... bike ride with Jasper...

love it. perfect Alice/Jasper moment.

you should continue this story it is really good

I'm hyperventilating just thinking about Jazz that way. Swoon. Really cute, I loved it. It was ver creative, I've never read something like that before.

I loved this scene. I love anything with Alice and Jasper. I think they are positively the cutest couple. Doesn't hurt, I'm southern and love Jasper all the more for being a southern boy himself. :)

Cute little one shot, well written and fun!

Loved it.

Is there more coming? Hope so. Me likey! :)

aw! Alice and Jasper are just so cute together :)

Enjoyable. For a short one-shot, it's not as high quality as I would expect from you, though-several of the sentences feel uncoordinated with the next and previous. Good ending though, and one that coordinates with the tittle! :-)

Critic.