wow, I like the mood of this fic, depressing, undramatic and hopeless. And the last line, oh Adachi you horrible villain <3

Would it be too much to ask for more? <3

This gave me goosebumps. I don't really have any critiques, just that you did a really excellent job.

Argh! Dojima! Argh!

Ugh, that was horrible...and so very, very good. Poor Dojima really can't move on, can he...

And, sheesh, Adachi, you've been busy, haven't you...as soon as Souji leaves, he goes on a spree, huh? -_-;; Bastard. I don't know why I like him. I must be a terrible person.

Anyway, this was great. I've been looking for a Bad Ending P4 fic ever since I got it. Thanks a bunch for writing this and making it so good. ^_^

My favorite part? Probably that last line. *shudder*

Holy crap. I love this.

I love this story, the set-up, the writing style, the IC-ness of the characters, really, I love everything in it so much it hurts.

Wow. I actually really like the whole setup of this thing, the mysterious female murders continuing and such... I think you've got Dojima and Adachi down to a t...

The last line... it's just SO PERFECT. You need nothing else, and I'm glad you never added anything else to the story, it's wonderful as it is.

So... bravissimo! It's excellent.

Wow, that was dark. Kind of epic in its own way.
I like it.

yes

Daammn that ending was really good. Really really good.