... ... ... O.o? WHAT THE-?! TENTEN'S A FRICKING PSYCHO!! Lol This is freaking creepy dude. Love the orginality, but this isn't my kind of story. You're a good writer tho.

Well, hun, you just keep re-inventing the category of crack-fiction, don't you. KabuTen? WTF?

Anyway, this chapter was kinda weird. Normally, it's not the kinda stuff I'd read. In that case, it's not as if I dislike it...

I don't know. It's well written. That's always true of you. But I can't figure this out 'cuz it seems as if there's something missing... A little piece of you that should be in here isn't... maybe that's just me thinking too hard, and maybe it's because I'm really tired and it's quarter after midnight, but that's kinda how this chapter feels...

One last thing, and please don't take this the wrong way... But it feels weird not having a gajillion reviews and hits on a story, eh?

Lotsa Love.

YAY FOR BLACK WIDOW STORIES! They're always fun. ^^

So Shika and Kabuto are both spot-on in terms of characterization. I'll say Tenten is too, in a way; you're very good at coming up with interesting personalities for her. Even if she seems like a self-insert (which is more of the case of TIMD as opposed to this...I hope. Unless there's something you're not telling me. XD) she's still likeable. And here, she's creepy in the very best way. You kind of want to see what she'll do to Shika but at the same time you're scared for him.

...And I'll say again: poor Gaara. And the others too. Because you know she did it. XD

ANYWAY. Rambling aside, I think what I'm trying to get at is MOAR PLZ. Everything you write turns to awesome.

Hey, 'kay so... wowzerz.

Wow, when I first read this, I just stared at the screen - you blew my brains out...

Now that I think about it, you generally have that effect on me. XD

I like the concept of an insane TENTEN. Despite what I show, I don't actually hate her... In canon, there's really no personality TO HATE, so you have as much fun with her as you'd like. CHA!

more plz thx


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r u w8ing 4 de bus?

You sort of make me love Tenten, you know that? Both as a Gaara-loving dancer, AND as a crazy seductress. Or whatever you want to call her now.

I sort of hope Temari doesn't decide to try and take him back. Because...yeah. She'll go to his place and see the hickeys and the scratch marks on his back and whatever else and she'll be all like "What the HELL is this?" And then...yeah. I don't know if you'd call that a suggestion or a "what I would do were I in her shoes" thing. XD

MOAR PLZ. ^^