so god can't wait 2 read the other book! seems like a lot of things will be happening! um... will the sun kingdom come back in the 2nd book? u know it Troy! oh well i guess i just have 2 read 2 find out!

kool!
love your fics!

i love this
this is a great story

Awesome prologue you got here!

you know i really do think this is well written...but man don't use fanfiction as a soapbox for your opinions on books and movies, it distrupts an otherwise nice flow

Book 2: The clash of Times

This was an awesome story!

It had taken a few days to read this story. I've read many fanfictions before, more sailor moon than anything. All i can really say is this is like the BEST fanfic I have ever read. Even tho you say that your grammar aint the best, it did really turn out AWESOME! PLEASE CONYINUE WITH BOOK 2! and i say the tittle for book 2 should be ; Book 2: The collision of the Times. please continue ... u are a really god writer and should continue writting...

i lke the clash of time but these was a great syory loved it

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I loved the way you ended this story!

Oh and I liked the title, "Paradox of Time" (sounds mysterious to me XD) But I also like the title you have chosen.

I loved the story! Definately can't wait for book two! As for the name personally i like Book 2 : Paradox of Time the best

This was the first Sailor Moon fanfiction I had ever read, and it really drew me into this whole world of fan-submitted stories. I was fascinated by the way you incorporated Sailor Moon elements and themes into your story, with other, unexpected twists: Serena and Rini's relationship, Serenity's sun sisters, etc. The details in your story were just great. I think this fanfic is the most "visual", descriptive of any fanfic I have read thus far.

Truthfully, the end was a little unsatisfying, because it was a cliffhanger and left so many issues unresolved, but many great writers do the same thing to encourage readers to check out their next book.

I love most all the Darien/Serena parts, except for the "whimpy" Darien phase. I understand you took some liberties in adjusting the characters' personalitites, but a never-been-kissed Darien doesn't seems cohesive with the story-line or the TV show. Hope you don't mind my suggestions- it's just I think you have a great writing talent (Publishing worthy), and I want you to capsize that when at all possible.

OMG I have to laugh how everyone is coming to attack the earth. Although, I have to question nemesis arrival, Rini has not yet gotten the crystal inside of her and that was sort of crucial in her mothers entrapment although it does not have to follow the same time flow since there was no troy or sisters in the story. Anyways I like paradox of time and cannot wait to read ur next update

this story is really good please hurry to write the second book

Book 2 Time Compression