 PaulBlay 9/27/09 . chapter 4"never really born, we are just found by someone, or adopted into a family"
That always struck me as a particularly stupid bit of canon. |
 PaulBlay 9/27/09 . chapter 3From a practical point of view, how many people will Kronos end up killing after he finally escapes? |
 PaulBlay 9/27/09 . chapter 1Looks like Kendra is a plot hole.
Elizabeth Slayer,
Buffy Immortal,
So when Buffy died fighting the Master, Kendra shouldn't have been called.
The 'Kendra is also an immortal' explanation wouldn't work well because Kendra had been brought up as a potential from a young age (and immortals can't get younger than they when they first died). |
 Darklight 8/26/05 . chapter 9Fantastic fic, liked it very much, and Cordy being a pre-immie |
 jessluvbna 8/4/05 . chapter 9good story write more |
 Dirbatua 1/13/05 . chapter 9cool im gonna read the sequal soon |
 sheilamarie 10/2/04 . chapter 2um...it's a claddagh ring |
 Brightly75 4/2/02 . chapter 9awesome story. very well written, good flow and believable up the good work |
 Knife Hand 3/22/02 . chapter 9way cool. you really need to post a sequel story, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
keep it up and keep posting |
 Grossclout 2/28/02 . chapter 8Joshua, if you are Joshua, the Evil Guy, I know how you got your nickname. For NOT FINISHING THIS STORY!
Regardless of who you are, the story is very good and quite enjoyable. Please finish!
Grossclout
The Editor From Hell |
 Murray 2/11/02 . chapter 1 I really like this story and I can't wait for the next posting. It just keeps getting better and better and the ride is like a rollar coaster, a really good fast turning roller coaster, with deep hills and valleys.
Keep up the great work,
Murray |
 Franger 12/17/01 . chapter 5 A little stupid and far too slow moving. |
 Lynn 12/12/01 . chapter 4 This is the silliest, most farfetched story I've read. |
 Malaskor 12/9/01 . chapter 4 More please Keep up the good work |
 Carrie 12/8/01 . chapter 4 What a great idea for a story. Please post more soon. |