 hell's lil angel13 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Aww, the first time, I love it! I'm surprised more people haven't done something like this, but your's is really good, it doesn't matter. I love how Drake is nervous after they're done, as if he thinks that he wasn't good enough for Josh. Total role-switch and I love it. Great job. |
 xXxSunEntwinedxXx 2009-02-26 . chapter 1I don't mind that it's late. My birthday sucked, anyways. But this totally makes it better :D
I almost feel a bit embarrassed for requesting this. Not because it's bad-I love it!-but I feel like a pervert. xD I guess I sort of am one!
Anyways, this was totally hot. :D I love the line:
"I have a sex-with-the-lights-on kink."
LOL! Also, I love:
"Just, well, um...I want us to have sex" And then the following "You mean...like...sex?" Haha. ;D
And finally, I love the "Drake opens his eyes, and finds Josh looking back, eyes full of concern and maybe, just maybe, something else that Drake isn't quite ready to name" (love? yay me for pointing out the obvious) Adorable :D
Mkay, I love this. It was everything I wanted, and more. You scared me, since you hadn't talked to me since Saturday, I thought you had disappeared.
At the end though, it says "...because they was them" I think you mean "they were them," or "because it was them" I don't really mind, but I figured you would.
ANYWAYS, much love! Thanks for the present!
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