Most authors would have taken the easy way out with unsubstantiated angst, but you didn't. Some would have trickled out at the end without answering the previous question, you still did not. Very exemplary, it seems like it will be a good story.

That was Naota. Really and truly Naota. If the rest of this is absolute garbage (Hope it isn't though) the story will still be good cuz of this prologue.

Seriously though, I'm looking forward to more.
Cg

Wow.

Melancholy without going too deeply into the angst pool. Pretty cool

This has the makings of a good fic, hope to see more soon!

That was great. Your words had great flow and conveyed Naota's feeling of confusion and depression very well. Although I do think it's to wordy for a twelve year olds inner thought, but that thought isn't too distracting.

All in all, I'm looking forward to further installments very much.