I didn't forget about this. How could I?

A fine ending to a fine story. I'm glad it ended happily for everyone. After all that Wander did, I think he deserved it.

You've done a great job with this story. Sad to see it end, but like I said it was a fine ending.

Aw, I love happy endings! And thank you so much for making my name so important! =)

I hate it when good stories end. It really is sad, but all stories have to end eventually. This story was very well written and thought out. The characters were wonderfully created! I have to say that this story is really high up on my favourites list, and I've enjoyed reading every minute of it from begining to end!

And so, for this fic I will tell you one more time, well done! And thank you for an amazing story! =)

This ending almost made me cry. I always hated endings of any kind, happy or sad. But this ending made me happy, it's just I hate when a good story has to end.

It was wonderful to be reading this story! This story was so awsome! I loved it to the very end!

Thanks for a good story! :)

Aw, just when it was getting good! =)
I'm happy for Liliane, and proud that she punched Emon!

This has really got me on the edge of my seat now! I'm going to be sad when it's over, but I'll enjoy every minute of the end!

Again, thank you for wanting to use my name and great chapter! =)

I've been checking my email constantly waiting for this chapter, I'm so glad its out! I can't wait to see how it ends!

Oh boy, it's all coming down to it now. Emon's there, Wander's there and about to go nuts on them all, Liliane came close to punching his lights out. I wonder what he's going to do with her and Jaccen when this is over.

Well done once again. It had me feeling sad along with Liliane about the colossi. And I wouldn't call you a pervert. I didn't expect it, but I'd say you did it very tastefully.

I'll be sad to see this story end, but all stories do. I'm sure you'll finish it as well as you began it.

There's only so much storyline you can stick to in the game. I find all of this quite interesting. I always have. I like the way you portray Liliane's struggle. It's heart-wrenching to watch because it's so well done. I can imagine anyone would feel the way she does after losing her sister, her friend, and now the new friends she's made in the colossi. I can only imagine what's going to happen when Emon arrives.

You're doing very well in this story. Very well. It's a great read.

I am not confused at all and I don't think you're traveling too far from the storyline. =)
The flashback and Liliane's moment with Aslar were really touching. Another great chapter!

It's really something when a story turns into something you never expected. Often, it does much better, and this is what I would say the case is with you. Excellent work. Now, you've got me worried for Liliane. I doubt Wander would kill her, but with how he's acting right now, I don't know what he would do. I wasn't expecting Dormin to blow the whistle on her either.

I'm waiting for the next chapter with excitement. ^_^

I'll be sad to see it end, but all stories do in their own time. I've enjoyed every chapter you've put out and I've no doubt I'll enjoy the chapters to come.

What's wrong with Wanderer? He really took a wrong turn.
Lionheart's death was the saddest one yet. I hope that Coldheart changes his mind about Liliane.

It was really cool to see Faelin and Aslar as humans! This chapter was very well done. I am going to be sad when the story is over, but I will enjoy what's coming! Once again, well done! =)

That chapter was awsome! The weirdness made it even better!

That was soo GOOD! I feel bad for the kids since there mom died. Also thanks for putting me in the story, even though it would still be good even if I wasn't in it.

That was awesome! The flashback scene was very touching. I was sad when Melanie died.

Thank you again for wanting to use my name in your story! It's really very nice of you! =)

As usual, great job! =)

I just realized I never left a review for your last chapter. For that, I'm really sorry.

It's a very interesting turn for this story, to have the colossi children. I never once expected that. So, well done for that. This newest chapter I think is one of the best I've seen in an already-great work. The flashback scene is very good. Very good work. I didn't spot a single error either.

Keep it up.

I liked this one. The kids are just adorable! =)
It is sad that Lionheart and Melanie won't be around much longer.
Anyway, great chapter! You never cease to amaze! =)