awesome! I loved how you managed to weasel the main story of FFXII into this one, and vaan and tear's reaction to everything seemed to be in character as well.
lol i can imagine Tear and Vaan, etc. actually in a game together! it looks sweet in my mind X3
The only thing i have a problem with how you changed POV's; make it more subtle. also, what you said was "normal POV" is Third Omniscient, where the narrator knows everything the chracters are thinking.
Also, "Tear looked disgusted" is better off as "Tear WAS disgusted" in this context, unless it was from another one's point of view
oh, and uh..
UPDATE THIS! IT"S BEEN MONTHS! XD

Oh. Interesting. I never would have thought of crossing these two stories over… Well done!!

I cannot wait for the next chapter. KEEP WRITING!

I've always wanted to write a ToA/FFXII Xover, but I never got past the entire "Vaan-Van" thing.

Anyhow, I loved that.
Go write more! It's a nice start.

PS: Vaan with red hair. ROFLMAO.