Very much in character. I enjoyed your new chapter. Waiting for more! Thanks!

I just love this! Please do continue it asap, I am hooked on your story.

Yea! I was so excited to see another chapter from you. I like your Charlie voice. Strong action writing as well. So...what happens next? ;)

Just to let you know I am enjoying your story greatly. Love your rhythm and than your characters ring true to the originals’. Can’t wait to see how the situation unfolds. Thanks and please keep posting regularly.

Interesting idea -- filling in the time gap on the show like this. I enjoyed the first chapter. Your dialogue and descriptions are well written. Looking forward to the next installment.