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Amarielah
2009-11-11 . chapter 8
You know, I can totally Ken being this douchey if he got pissed enough. It seems like the type of way he'd lash out.
edwarddazzledme
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
wow..that was really good
i like it!
update soon! :)
Potgenie
2009-07-12 . chapter 6
This is interesting, though the chapters are a little short! Miyako seems so temperamental! But seeing how I'm a Ken-fangirl, that could just be me being biased... XD

Update soon!
dEaYrEkSness
2009-06-29 . chapter 6
ohh... like the story! Can't wait till next update! :)
PrincessJaded
2009-06-14 . chapter 6
There are no quotations marks... I'm confused about the dialogue.
mysteree101
2009-06-09 . chapter 5
LOVED IT! PLZ UPD8 ASAP!

LUV YA!

MYSTEREE101
Oo-Violetmoon-oO
2009-05-14 . chapter 5
That's against pretty much every rule that ever existed. They clearly are not good at the whole "breaking up" concept.

This can only lead to *drumroll* drama!

Update soon!
ClicheLoveSongs
2009-05-10 . chapter 5
I really like your story!(: I like that you've given it a twist so it starts out with them already hating each other. Please continue writing so we can read on!(:
PrincessJaded
2009-05-10 . chapter 5
Haven't reviewed in a while. Sorry. Just caught up on everything.

Well yeah, their friends are going to be pissed, especially because arguments errupted between others. Tsk, tsk.

Stupid Yolei and Ken.

Let's see where they go from here...
mysteree101
2009-04-20 . chapter 3
Please please upd8 and soon. This is so god!

Luv Ya!

Mysteree101
Oo-Violetmoon-oO
2009-04-17 . chapter 3
Oh I like this so far. This could be a /very/ interesting battle.
Expired In Goreville
2009-03-04 . chapter 2
Ahh, I love this.
It actually kinda sounds like what my best friend just went through. 0_0
Keep up the amazing work!
ShiroSakuraTenshi
2009-03-04 . chapter 2
i don't like where this going, i really don't like this is going at all. I'm scared for her.
ShiroSakuraTenshi
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
you miss izzy
PrincessJaded
2009-03-03 . chapter 2
I wanted a bit of a longer chapter, but I get I guess I get why you're doing them that short.
Anyway, I liked this. Very nice.
One thing though, in the dialogue, you need to capitalize the first letter whatever the character is saying.

Update soon please! I'm really loving this...thusfar. Just don't go Jyoumi or Koumi on me.
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