wow, i just started reading this story about a week ago, but this last chapter was really, really dramatic...deep...exciting..i can't find the right word, but it was the best! i want so badly to see them get rid of the humans who hurt edward! maybe the volturi will team up with the cullens to kill them? that would be cool. or maybe in some twisted way, Aro already knows about this experiment? i love the mystery of this story. and the deep sadness in edward and also, therefore, in bella. and the love story on top makes it perfect. thank you so much, and please keep writing!

awesome story. glad that I got to read so much at once.

will be looking forward to an update. i know the holidays are here which keeps most people from updating, i think most of us in the fandom understand.

Well! W-O-W!! I love this story! I love this chapter, it revealed soo much, and not only did it show the strength of Edward, but the strength of Bella too, and her determenation to be there for Edward..

I dunno why alice was soo jumpy about the subject, maybe because we all know that bella has always wanted to be a vampire!
And its not true!! there aren't 4 left that's impossible!
Love it thxx alot! <3

This is a stroy I have been wanting to read forever now. I read it all this morning until there was nothing left to read. I love this story! I hope you update soon!

O! I like it! Intriguing start, can't wait to see where you take it. :)

I really like this story. I'm interested to see Edward progress toward being a normal vampire, or as normal as the Cullens get anyway. I like the dynamic between Edward and Bella in this one. You've really done a good job with the bones of the original story.

I hope you update soon and maybe throw us a bone on who's been holding our vampire hostage.

Hi I am faithlover14 and I love your story,please hurry and finish it :)

Aw, poor Edward. A few answers there, but still so many questions. Thank you for updating. I hope everything is going better for you now. :)

aww i loved the chapter! happy, sad, and informative!

I was initially disinterested in this story when I saw it summarized in the search log, but so many people favorited it and other authors gave rave reviews and suggestions so I decided to check it out. I am SO glad that I did. The concept for the story is amazing. I find myself invested in the characters already, and can't wait to read updates on your story.

Wow - this chapter was definitely a little saddening, but I'm really glad that we finally got the first glimpses of Edward's past. I look forward to your future updates, as always. Thank you!

this is one of the best twilight fanfic i have ever read. wel done
its so! good
plz keep goining

This story is great. I don't know how much longer it will take you to update, bit i'm very excited. :)

Such a different dark take on the story. Really enjoying it. Looing foward to updates.

woah...just woah. so did the person take the device inside of him out that last day? i'm a little confused, but this was amazing. thank you so much for continuing the story, it means a lot to me. i love this so much. keep writing and just being brilliant! thank you.