I love this story. I'm slowly understanding how this anedote is going to work. Hmmm so they have to get a sample from his stomach. How are they going to do that? When he throws up? Poor edward!:(

What an unusual twist on Twilight. Very well written and very entertaining. Thank you.

Wonderful twist on cannon vampfic! Very unique. Thank you for sharing this.

OH MY GOD! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST OF THE STORY! TOOTLES!

What a wonderfully written story!

This has been the most entertaining story ever. I read until 4am when I had to stop because my Ipad battery was empty. I slept for only 2 hours because my subconcious wanted to finish. Anyway your tale was mesmerising. As for EPOV, the chapter when they first kiss would be nice. Also a little more insight into why Edward and Jasper cannot seem to get along. Oh yes, the chapter when Edward feeds by himself(with Bella there) for the first time. Looking forward to some outakes. Please keep writing, your words just flow.

Mao

So touching! Yes, he speaks...great chapter!

Deeply liking this story...seems like Bella is just 'feeling' rather than rationally 'thinking' in this one...
I'm already drawn in to the story...the fear, the minute by minute trying to calm, reassure...as Bella says... "my vampire"-can't wait to see if he responds...

That was one of my favorite stories in FF that I have EVER read. Great story line. Sooo different than any other I have read. Very creative. I also want to add that you kept the attention of the reader throughout the entire story with no boring chapters and you did it ALL without a single lemon in sight. A story without a lemon in FF is rare enough but to write such an interesting one that has no lemon is especially rare. Too often writers rely on lemons to make the story interesting or when they can't figure out a great story line they just throw in a lemon because they aren't talented enough to come up with something wlse that will hold the readers interst. You have achieved, in my opinion, a little nugget of wonderful with this story. I may be late coming to it, but I'm glad I did! I can't wait to go to your author page and see what else you have to offer. Until the next story, take care and thanks for sharing your talent with the FF readers!

I feel so sad for Charlie. To never know exactly what happened to his daughter and to not have anyway or idea how to bring her back.

I am so glad for a happy ending. This one of the better vampires mysteries I'veread. It was done very well.

Thank you for sharing this.

Who was the man looking for Bella that Charlie mentioned to her when he was yelling at her. And with everything going on and knowing that people were coming for Edward, how did she miss that clue? I have a theory emerging. In the beggining of the story, Edward asks if Bella coiuld be turned by injection. I think that Edward Sr. the original doctor, somehow figured out there were vampires and was trying to make a drug that would give Humans vamoire abilities. I think the testing on his wife went terribly wrong and he she died. I think somehow his son Edward jr. followed in his footsteps but somewhere along the way, information landed in the wrong hands and after Edward III's parents died, I think he was injected with venom, either real or synthetic in a lab. That's how they were able to transform him. Then they started to experiment in reverse of what the original Edward was trying to do. Instead of giving Humans vampire strength and abilities, I think they were trying to figure out how to control the vampires by making them weak. just a theory but we'll see. My mind has the ability to go overboard! Really enjoying the story. I mean like LOTSSSSSSS!

Just a line or two to tell you how much I am enjoying your story. So very different than the other vampire stories I've read on FF. This one has so many possibilities and so many different directions you can go and i can't wait to see where you take us. I have a theory as to why he is the way he is. here goes. I think that the Volturi know of his powers and that they wanted him to join forces with them. I think he refused and they decided that someone as powerful as him could'nt remain normal because he was to much of a threat to the vamps in power. I think ultimately they didn't want to destroy him outright because they were hoping to wear him down/break him enough to where he would give in. Only I think that he escaped and was headed to the Cullen clan because he knew of them and thought they could help. Thats why they found him so close to atheory and we'll see if i'm right. Gotta go read now, Its just to good to put down. If your story ends up being as good and as plotworthy standout as I think it will be, it will be right up there with my all time favorite FF stories! Kudos to you!

I was surprised. I totally expected it to be werewolves :) lovin this story

Finally finished This story! Its amazing. Are you still planning to write outtakes?

"Maybe soon we'll find out his name!" LOL
The best chapter ever! I love this story! Sorry for being late to review it but I was so engrossed in reading it since last night, it was that good. I prefer AH ff but this one is very interesting and fresh. Great work!