cute i loved it!

Wow this story is so amazing! I hope you plan to continue it. I really like it so far. The way you portrayed Ivy and her grief was very well done. I felt like I was really there in the story.. like I was there with her in the woods being pelted by cold rain. Keep up the good work! :)

Huh. This is really different, but it's very good. I'm very interested to see what you do with it. Please continue! :o)

Ok that was very disapointing, but yes that was how I was considering the story to end. Job well done to you my fellow writer.