|Reviews for Afterwards|
| mike91848 8/8/10 . chapter 3
I like your story, a good ending to the movie. It's well written and I liked the way you jumped from past to present and back. And YES you should write an epilogue. Your writing is very descriptive which I love. I just recently watched the movie and the images are still fresh in my mind. Your story is right on.
| Cittykat17 7/11/10 . chapter 3
"Ivy, promise not to scream..."
Breath-taking. So beautifly written, it might as well be written M. Night himself. Although you probably gave up the idea a long time ago, I wish you would write a epilouge.
| Jal'ier 6/16/10 . chapter 3
Oh my gosh, this is one of the best FanFictions I've read on this site! You're writing is really good. I love how you switch from a flashback to the present time. It's like the movie!
Please write more!
| Kazulallan 4/13/10 . chapter 3
i actually really like this! giving one of the creatures a name helped the story a lot!
| cup-o'-sweet-T.E.A 2/16/10 . chapter 3
Loved it! I'd love to see more chapters though!
| abbby 10/1/09 . chapter 3
cute i loved it!
| Ariana Silversnare 8/13/09 . chapter 2
Wow this story is so amazing! I hope you plan to continue it. I really like it so far. The way you portrayed Ivy and her grief was very well done. I felt like I was really there in the story.. like I was there with her in the woods being pelted by cold rain. Keep up the good work! :)
| hopeisabluebird 8/3/09 . chapter 2
Huh. This is really different, but it's very good. I'm very interested to see what you do with it. Please continue! :o)
| Cleo.Crow 4/11/09 . chapter 1
Ok that was very disapointing, but yes that was how I was considering the story to end. Job well done to you my fellow writer.