I like your story, a good ending to the movie. It's well written and I liked the way you jumped from past to present and back. And YES you should write an epilogue. Your writing is very descriptive which I love. I just recently watched the movie and the images are still fresh in my mind. Your story is right on.

"Ivy, promise not to scream..."

Breath-taking. So beautifly written, it might as well be written M. Night himself. Although you probably gave up the idea a long time ago, I wish you would write a epilouge.

Oh my gosh, this is one of the best FanFictions I've read on this site! You're writing is really good. I love how you switch from a flashback to the present time. It's like the movie!

Please write more!

i actually really like this! giving one of the creatures a name helped the story a lot!

Loved it! I'd love to see more chapters though!

cute i loved it!

Wow this story is so amazing! I hope you plan to continue it. I really like it so far. The way you portrayed Ivy and her grief was very well done. I felt like I was really there in the story.. like I was there with her in the woods being pelted by cold rain. Keep up the good work! :)

Huh. This is really different, but it's very good. I'm very interested to see what you do with it. Please continue! :o)

Ok that was very disapointing, but yes that was how I was considering the story to end. Job well done to you my fellow writer.