Hi there!

The multi-languages idea was very unique. I've never thought nor heard of it before on fan-fiction. Very creative! However, it would have been nice if you added translations for all the languages somewhere such as at the bottom or in another chapter, so readers can understand it, yet doesn't affect the story. Even a general translation would be nice.

I can't understand Japanese (though I wish I could) or Danish, and I'm only in a beginners German class (which your story helped in seeing just how much I have learned/ haven't learned XD), but what I could read of it was quite interesting and makes you think of the story line behind the tetris blocks.

Keep on writing!

-Hyzenthlayfox

Very unique idea on using different languages! I never saw a fan-fiction that did this before...

Though I have a question... it's silly I know, though could you send me a complete English version of it? (Complete, as in, English all through-out)

Sadly, my parents are not German or Danish, so I can't understand those two. I an understand parts of Japanese, though sadly I never went to Japanese school, so I don't know most Kanji letters.