awww this fanfic, is so kawaii ]

Okay, that was strange with Vegeta as Santa but very cute anyway.

yo waz up maybe u could do a story were Bulma is Sailor Mercury and ChiChi is Sailor Mars they get thrown into the DBZ diminson and the others have to come after them because a new evil is arising that they all need to fight together. The pairings could be Vegeta/Usagi Yamcha/Ami Goku/Rei Piccolo/Makoto Krillin/18 17/Minako. U can put Gohan, Trunks, and Goten in already if u want but u would have to come up with a reason why they waited so long to come unless u have the dim. on diff. timewarps in 1 dim its been years(DBZ) the other its been days(SM)

Well... whadya know, its the Christmas season again! Hehe, I have good timing _

You like the phrase "thrown together" doncha? I've only looked in two of your fics, but its been in both of them. lol.

'The white lights gleamed invitingly and the ornaments places ever so artfully around the tree shone in their splendor.'
placed

'The eye's of her prince stared back at her.'
There shouldn't be an apostrophe there lol

'you look radient tonight my love'
I think you misspelled radiant, but I'm not completely sure.

'Misteltoe'
Mistletoe, I think...

Aw! That was so sweet! And you kept Vegeta mostly in character too, though it's hard to picture him being sweet like that... Goku or someone else must have given him the idea to pretend to be Santa Claus.
And the second part did sound slightly rushed, but meh.

SilverCaladan

aww this was so cute
Merry Christmas to you and your family

I'm glad you're not putting up a sequel because it would ruin the whole effect.
I really like this fic although I see a couple of spelling errors. (ex: radient should be "radiant" and lavander should be "lavender") I think this went very smoothly in the first half but it was slightly rushed with Vegeta's confession... um... I'm not sure how to word it... I guess I would think Vegeta would be slightly hesistant when admitting that... (OK, ignore that. This is just the start of another rambling by me.)
I really like this though Especially how you ended it with Trunks.

WOW I really liked this as taest with words.

That was nice. I don't usually read romance/mushy stories like this, but eh. T'was good.

RLB

PRETTY!11

sniff sniff... well better get off b4 my teacher comes and sees why I'm crying. gr here she comes...

ah

this is SO sweet

I love it...!

I wish Santa would come and see me like that! *blush* Great little story. To bad I didn't read it around X-mas time. I can tell you were touched by the christmas bug. WOnderful job, as always!

Mystic

HAHAHA that was the sweetest thing...HAHAHA I cant imagine (well I can) him in a santa suit. HAHA that was so cute ::runs around the room:: I want a vegeta (or trunks for christmas) ::pouts:: well I have to go the bell is about to ring for lunch YEAH LUNCH!

i liked that fic!ja!

I IT BUT VEGETA AS SANTA HAHAHAHAHAH OTAY BYE.

*sniffles* i was ok until the end..but then trunks..said*sniffles again* why do you people do this to me!

very cute fic!:)who cares if vegeta's OOC i still loved it.