Aw...that's so sweet...

'I’m not entirely certain, not being very experienced at these sorts of things, but I’m fairly certain that you kissed me back.'
Lil Sev actually had a sense of humor back then, awh XD

A right and proper scene that suggests a great need for further scenes :)

I loved it. A great Sevvy/Lily one-shot. THere's not enough fanfiction for this pairing...

Wow, that was a cool way to change things.

Very well done! I've often thought he should have said "I love you"when he was trying to apologize that time.

This is going to sound so weird put together but...that was bloody damn awesome!!

Again, what a wonderfully written beginning for a story! I simply cannot wait for more (though, I know I must).

Severus was wonderfully in character and you captured the mindsets of adolescents well.

I loved the description Severus gave of her slippers, btw.

Anyway, good luck with the writing!

YES! YESS!

I KNEW YOU HAD IT IN YOU, MAN! -.-;

I'm sorry, i found it very very very depressing that Severus never found his courage until Later rather than Sooner, as it would've changed so many things...

loved it. :)

Write more...NOW! that is not a request but a command, WRITE MORE NOW!

That was one of the cutest Lily/Severus one-shots I've ever read...it was the sweetest idea and Sev was still sort of a dweeb, instead of the macho-Snape I sometimes see in fics like these. Beautifully written, it made my day. :)

If only, right? If only! This was a nice little snippet- but please update one of the longer stories? Cheers!

Wow, your characterisation was PERFECT! The writing style was just like JKR. This scene may as well have actually been IN the books! Amazing job!! :D

great !
so sad he didn't actually said the words ..

Interesting start to what I am sure will be a great story. I'm sure loads of people have asked you this but does this story mean that you aren't going to continue with Alchemist?