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princekakrot
2005-10-16
ch 4, anon.
abuseit was great keep writing i say you should finish the story were does it end is it a girl or boy an di have a question why yamcha it would be more often like trunks anyway its your story i should not question yo9ur greatness thankl u for writng it
Karilovcowboybebop
2004-12-30
ch 4,
abusekool
Lovekakarot
2004-12-13
ch 4,
abuseSuch a moving fanfiction! Hug poor Goku, Damn that Yamcha! At least Vegeta loves you! Great Fiction VegetaxGoku forever!
Tyi-Maxwell
2004-07-05
ch 4,
abuseu make a sequel right now and yamcha can go die!
Ian Davies
2004-02-03
ch 3, anon.
abuseDear Author,
This story is explicit. Full of romance, a tad bit of lemon, and the truth of Vegeta's real personality. Most other stories just have him as a happy, peppy type of guy, which is something that he could never be. It's written with terrific skill and I hope you continue to write such fantastic stories. Anyway, I was wondering if you had to be a certain age to view this website. And, um, this may seem a little weird but, do you have to be, um, gay lets say, to come to this website or can you be, um, other type to come here. Please E-Mail me back. Terrific story. From a dragonball z fanatic.
missyl
2003-12-12
ch 4, anon.
abuseThe Fic was so MOVNING i Felt to tears comin down my eyes on part 4. Anyway this is best fic EVER !. it's got all ,love , angst , and next ss . And in the baby is a little girl too. I feel very happy for both them . hope to to see the next one.
note: i read this fic a lot!
nessa
2003-08-11
ch 4, anon.
abusethat was great i like the part when vegeta realises that goku was pregnant
majin buu
2003-06-04
ch 3, anon.
abusei feel sick after reading that how can a guy get pregnant
sam
2003-06-04
ch 4, anon.
abusei think thats kinda sick although i havent a problem with yoai and goku and vegeta make a good couple but for christ sake how could u make goku pregnant i mean u must have a sick mind to do it uv put goku to shame >:(
Gokuchan
2003-02-13
ch 4, anon.
abuseGAH! Is that it? *sniff* I really enjoyed that.I mean, it was a good ending.for that chapter. What of the baby? O.O *cries*
Night Raven
2003-02-13
ch 4,
abuseYou wouldn't happen to have the entire version would you, with the omitted parts. This was really good.
Afrodite
2002-12-15
ch 4,
abuseThat was beautiful,especially Vegeta's "nature of tears" speech! In just four chapters you managed to weave a moving, heartfelt story that ended hopefully. Nice work! This deserves a spot on my Favorites list:)
Afrodite
2002-12-15
ch 3,
abuseWhat an interesting twist! I would never have figured that Goku had previously been pregnant--and by Yamcha!

This was a powerfully moving chapter--my heart goes out to Goku, and I certainly understand Vegeta's ill feelings toward Yamcha.
Afrodite
2002-12-15
ch 2,
abuseWhat a nice cliffhanger-- I was half-expecting an explosion to occur given Vegeta's temper!

I liked how you showed Krillin's pride that Goku entrusted him with his secrets, and how you show Vegeta's hurt at being left out.
Afrodite
2002-12-15
ch 1,
abuseWhat a suspenseful first chapter! I wonder if Goku is afraid that Vegeta will leave him because of the pregnancy.

I liked the interactions between Goku and Vegeta, and the way you portrayed Goku's conflicted nature--appearing to be his usual cheery self, but inwardly feeling pained.
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