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| princekakrot 2005-10-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseit was great keep writing i say you should finish the story were does it end is it a girl or boy an di have a question why yamcha it would be more often like trunks anyway its your story i should not question yo9ur greatness thankl u for writng it |
| Karilovcowboybebop 2004-12-30 ch 4, | abusekool |
| Lovekakarot 2004-12-13 ch 4, | abuseSuch a moving fanfiction! Hug poor Goku, Damn that Yamcha! At least Vegeta loves you! Great Fiction VegetaxGoku forever! |
| Tyi-Maxwell 2004-07-05 ch 4, | abuseu make a sequel right now and yamcha can go die! |
| Ian Davies 2004-02-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseDear Author, This story is explicit. Full of romance, a tad bit of lemon, and the truth of Vegeta's real personality. Most other stories just have him as a happy, peppy type of guy, which is something that he could never be. It's written with terrific skill and I hope you continue to write such fantastic stories. Anyway, I was wondering if you had to be a certain age to view this website. And, um, this may seem a little weird but, do you have to be, um, gay lets say, to come to this website or can you be, um, other type to come here. Please E-Mail me back. Terrific story. From a dragonball z fanatic. |
| missyl 2003-12-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseThe Fic was so MOVNING i Felt to tears comin down my eyes on part 4. Anyway this is best fic EVER !. it's got all ,love , angst , and next ss . And in the baby is a little girl too. I feel very happy for both them . hope to to see the next one. note: i read this fic a lot! |
| nessa 2003-08-11 ch 4, anon. | abusethat was great i like the part when vegeta realises that goku was pregnant |
| majin buu 2003-06-04 ch 3, anon. | abusei feel sick after reading that how can a guy get pregnant |
| sam 2003-06-04 ch 4, anon. | abusei think thats kinda sick although i havent a problem with yoai and goku and vegeta make a good couple but for christ sake how could u make goku pregnant i mean u must have a sick mind to do it uv put goku to shame >:( |
| Gokuchan 2003-02-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseGAH! Is that it? *sniff* I really enjoyed that.I mean, it was a good ending.for that chapter. What of the baby? O.O *cries* |
| Night Raven 2003-02-13 ch 4, | abuseYou wouldn't happen to have the entire version would you, with the omitted parts. This was really good. |
| Afrodite 2002-12-15 ch 4, | abuseThat was beautiful,especially Vegeta's "nature of tears" speech! In just four chapters you managed to weave a moving, heartfelt story that ended hopefully. Nice work! This deserves a spot on my Favorites list:) |
| Afrodite 2002-12-15 ch 3, | abuseWhat an interesting twist! I would never have figured that Goku had previously been pregnant--and by Yamcha! This was a powerfully moving chapter--my heart goes out to Goku, and I certainly understand Vegeta's ill feelings toward Yamcha. |
| Afrodite 2002-12-15 ch 2, | abuseWhat a nice cliffhanger-- I was half-expecting an explosion to occur given Vegeta's temper! I liked how you showed Krillin's pride that Goku entrusted him with his secrets, and how you show Vegeta's hurt at being left out. |
| Afrodite 2002-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWhat a suspenseful first chapter! I wonder if Goku is afraid that Vegeta will leave him because of the pregnancy. I liked the interactions between Goku and Vegeta, and the way you portrayed Goku's conflicted nature--appearing to be his usual cheery self, but inwardly feeling pained. |