Why haven't you continued this story! This is one of the more interesting AUs that I have seen on this site. You seriously need to continue this because it will be a waste of a good story if you don't

I like this story. It showcases his new ability without making him overpowered. It has some nice character development. The only thing I would recommend is trying to diverge from canon just a little bit more.

I haven't read the rest of the story yet but I got a feeling that Haku might be a mana as well.

Just a hunch

awesome i cant wait for more :)

Great story!

this is interesting i wonder what will happen next

like Kyuubi, i still think Naruto is a moron, well most of the time.

too moronic for my taste.

Never played the Atelier games, but loving this story so far. Outta curiousity can Gwendolyn hear the conversations between Naruto and the Kyuubi, or does she even know he's sealed in Naruto?

Interesting. I wonder what this will do for her drive? Most likely increase it, if I understand her thinking.

Top notch chapter. Keep at it!

nice story, not really sure where most of the crossover elements come from though. i know your using some bits from codex alera, but beyond that i'm not sure.

cant wait to see more.

It's always annoying when an author tries to force canon events even though they shouldn't be happening. While the original parts in the story are nice, you don't put much effort into thinking how they change the original plot. A good example is how Naruto had the presence of mind to make a clone to assist Kakashi, but then was suddenly struck with The Dumb just so that the fight with Haku could be pretty much the same as before, making it a rather dull read.

Really liking where the story is going and I am glad that you have updated. The Jade Shift is getting more and more complex and I can't wait to see if Naruto will gain a new Mana. May I suggest a fire one next.

i like the potential dynamics of this naruto/femsasuke pairing.

fun to read.

Well I am really loving this story so far, and I am loving Naruto maturation as the chapters pass. As for Sakura, she needs to go die in a fire...alright, at least actually be useful before she can actually say anything to anyone is more like it. So I love the story so far, and can't wait to read the next chapter.