This looks like a very good story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also if you need any help with new clan members I will be happy to help. Anyway Keep up the good work.

Heh... I love it! "Look, mommy, I'm another statistic!" Gotta love that... I needs more chapters!

Now that's interesting! i like how that goon of a crushatrice tried to shake itself off the sword and the ravager swinging along with it.

keep it up, waiting for more!

Great stuff! I am really enjoying your use of 3rd person here. I hope you choose to update soon, and I would really like to see more of this story.

Good luck with continuing, if you do!

I like this story, as I believe it has good potential for later on, if you decide to continue it that is ;)

Sounds pretty nice. I've never played FFTA2 before, but I'm hoping to write a fic on it. Hope I can learn something from your fic. Update soon, 'kay?