HOLY. RYE. ON. CHEESE. WOW. I was so not expecting that *at all.* *squeals* That was so cool ;; Naturally, it was also sad, but the coolness of this fic kinda knocks that off to the side. That was such a great twist! ;; It totally rocked! Yayness for the downfall of humans in Yu Yu Hakusho! _ Anyhoo, I'm just jealous I never really put much thought into something like this. But, hey, you did think of something like this- And you shared it! Hurrahness! ;; Now the rest of the world can also read this. _

Really, though, it was great! I had to reread that part a couple times to make sure I was reading right. Talk about a shocky, wowy moment. ;; And that says alot about your short fic _ It rocks and so do you! Yay!

- The Kayla -

man make this a longer chapter story will u? i like it...but iwant more...so onegai?

hmm...makes me think.
Tranlation for blonds: OUCH! My head! What's it doing! EP! Oh, it must be tat one thingey...isn't it called time or something?

I loved this story! I'm gonna' check out some of your others!

*Shivers* That was so good. Creepy, true, but good. MM... Such yummy fics. Great writer. Have anything on ? If you do, please send me either your pen name, or the url for it:

or or IM me on MSN

PLEASE write a sequel! I love your fics so much!

Dennimari! You sounded genki in your bio too! Nice prose by the way! Keep up the good work!

I loved it...

Wow... This is new... Almost refreshing. Please, please, please continue!

Wow. I'll admit, I don't usually read poetry, but I'm really glad I read this one! I kinda forgot to breathe during it. _ Hope to see more from you in the future.

waaaaaahhhhhhhh! i love this!

please do a sequel? pwetty pweeeeaaaazzzzeee?

_ i like stories with kurama being like this!

write a sequel pleaaaase!

ja ne,

Interesting-I'd like to see a sequal to this. _ I like the darkness in this one. It's different.

I found this interresting. can you continue it?

Nice. Very nice.