AW Thats so not fair! :( Excellent writing though!! I definitely got slightly teary-eyed just reading it like 15 times over and over.

*sniff* love this *wipes away the tears*

This is wonderfully tragic and angsty! This was a great read. Any chance of developing this further? I'd love to read it. Maybe throw a little SSHG into the mix? If not, its a great oneshot - lots of great emotion in under 700 words.

I have enjoyed this interesting story. Keep smiling. :-)

so wonderful, but so sad! You did a perfect job on this!

How sad! Both of them with their expected choices--and both so very unhappy.