I thought this new chapter was great, I don't understand why you think it feels "rushed" or "without emotion" . Heck, I was digging it! I love the very idea of it, someone trying control the Doctor and all that. It was great fun and I'm sad that it ended here. Would really like to see another chapter, the story line combined with your writing style makes this a joy to read! :)

I'm really interested to see where this goes.
What's the Master doing there?
What's happened to the TARDIS?
Can they save the Doctor?
Questions like that are running through my head. Thank you for writing such an intriguing story, I look forward to the next update.
Happy writing!

Now the Master is involved? Okay, please update soon-I want to know what happens:)

I hopew you are planning to update soon this story is great XD

ohh your fanfic is brilliant! amazing! poor doctor :((((
WHAAAAAATTTTT?
HAROLD SAXON? THE MASTER? WHAAAT? seriously, you need to updatee! my life depends on thiiiis!

I really like it! I cannot wait until you post the next chapter!

This is a really good story, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!

Love this story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter

more please :3

Yes! I'm glad to see you haven't abandoned this glorious fic. I feel this chapter gives more questions than answers but I suppose that's a good thing to keep readers going. This chapter gave more explanation and allowed the Doctor's friends to get a little bit closer in the mystery of the Doctors detainment; I'm really interested in what Harold Saxon has to say.
I also liked that Eleven is more serious than Ten but sometimes I feel he isn't as intense. When he came, I was overjoyed for a fresh portrayal of the Doctor and with time I began to appreciate the things I liked about for updating, thought this chapter had plenty of details. I can identify with the rushed, lack of emotion feeling, chapter's still good and I'm really sorry for the lengthy review...

I like the new chapter it gives more insight.

You probably need to write on, and then double back to make it more to your liking if you want. I have it all the time. :)

Matt is a good doctor, but I had to get used to him. I like the more serious doctor too. So I love to read more about him.

Good luck with the next chapter.

I'm so glad to read a new chapter, I thought the story has been abandoned. It's really interesting so please update soon, don't leave it in the cliffhanger!

Hey, I'm really liking this story so far, it's awesome! It's paced nicely, easy to read, I haven't caught any mistakes in the spelling or grammar, and your characters seem just like the characters of the show. Of course, I haven't seen any Torchwood yet, so Gwen and Ianto are being introduced to me for the first time, but the Doctor, Jack, Martha... all spot on!
All in all, I enjoy this story immensely, and can't wait for your next chapter!

THANK YOU! Haha, it's been so long and I was ecstatic to see that this is not a dead fic! I did love the development, so keep it up! Your fans are alive.

Love the plot-twist. I hope they find out what's really going on, soon.