 Blissaster 2009-09-25 . chapter 1Love the story.
... Come to think of it, I ALWAYS love your NaruGaa stories, though I haven't reviewed all yet. But, oh well... I have read you stories for... more than once obviously. Write more please? |
 Agatsuma Ritsuka 2009-07-09 . chapter 1I almost thought he pulled what Naruto tried to do. But looking for someone kinda ruined the possibility. |
 jenniebennie 2009-07-02 . chapter 1Wow I could not stop bawling my eyes out. It was that heart-wrenching and I loved every minute of it. So I wonder did Temari and Kankuro know where he was although I thought not. I am almost thinking Gaara forgave him too easily but eight years is a long time and in shinobi years thats a life time so I can also understand it.
Great job and keep up the good work :O) |
 Ugawa 2009-05-18 . chapter 1Great story. I knew he wasn't dead, though. Because of the beginning bit. This being a naru/gaa and all, who else could he be looking for? lol.
Loved the ending. Very sweet :D |
 iluvanimals 2009-04-12 . chapter 1okay. this is like my 5th time or something reading this story and it gets better and better everytime. this one actually had my chest all tight and in pain and not many stories can do that. good job! and i totally agree with one of the other reviewers, that sasuke adds a bitter taste whenever he's in a story.(sakura too).
All in all, excellent job! keep up the good work... |
 keiichisei 2009-03-10 . chapter 1You had my chest in this ache for like... I don't know how long. I kept getting called away from my computer and eventually I told everyone to STOP so I could finish this story and make the pain go away! I like how you portrayed Gaara, and I think you had Naruto very in-character as far as personality and character flaws. I really can see him messing up badly and trying to make it right for eight whole years. The Sasuke part had me sad, it really is a sad tale and I hope the manga doesn't go that direction... that will result in one broken kid in me. But good story! I enjoyed reading it. |
 QueenTigris 2009-03-04 . chapter 1E! So good! It's so intense and bittersweet-- I've never seen this side of you! I don't care if there's no smut (partially because I know there's an epilogue full of it), all the sweetness makes up for it! (And that's really saying something! XD)
And I'm so far behind. ToT
Even if I have to stay up late, I will read all that I missed! So-- onward~ To the pron! |
 shogi 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Wow. That was awesome!! I LOVED it!! Yeah... ok, you got me. I thought Gaara was dead... and then I was thinking, I wonder if this is a bit of retribution for our choosing the ending of "The Road Less Travelled By" to be fluffy.
LOL
But this was wonderful!! So much angst and then BANG! Naruto steps in and is a lovely, goofy guy who almost makes up for being a loser in the beginning! Yay!
...He was really awful though. I don't think Naruto really deserves Gaara. But! Then add Sasuke to the mix (which adds a bitter taste ANYWHERE you add him) and voila! Gaara/Naruto Angst a la mode! And Gaara wasn't too nice himself... telling Naruto all that stuff when he's just come from killing Sasuke... well, anyways:
XD
AWESOME STORY!! Naruto/Gaara FTW! |
 Nikkler 2009-03-01 . chapter 1I loved it! I was like NO Naruto can't be in love with Sasuke! How could you say that this is a Gaara x Naruto fic with you did this. ::cries:: I was tempted not to finish until Sakura came in and talked to our fav. blond. Poor Gaara that sucks. like I said loved it. Huggles
Nikkler |
 xxnarufanxx 2009-02-28 . chapter 1wow this story was so wondeful!
you described the emotions very well and i almost had the feeling to be next to naruto and feel what he or gaara felt!!
awesome job |
 Shukakku the adorable raccoon 2009-02-28 . chapter 1T-T it was so sad and so gripping and so beautiful and such a tragic romance that turns out happy in the end!
CAN U WRITE A SEQUEL? |
 Futile Faith 2009-02-28 . chapter 1This seems different from you usual style of writing but I love it. You certainly managed to pull this off: angst without whining, drama without it being a soap opera and romance without it being sappy. Loved it. |
 SILVER-me 2009-02-28 . chapter 1this was absolutely beautiful. you have such abeautiful play with words. i got angry at naruto 4 being a jerk(i understood y he was), i lcaughed, and i almost cried a few times. definently my favorite one-shot |
 Cheska 2009-02-27 . chapter 1You nearly fooled me into thinking Gaara died.
I'm impressed with Naruto's determination - 8 years! However, it must have been painful from Gaara's perspective - he gave Naruto everything. Then he finds out Naruto was sleeping and in love with Sasuke.
I love how Naruto is willing to be with Gaara now - even if he is a "cripple". True love people. :D |
 ednama 2009-02-27 . chapter 1I like it very much! A very good, emotional fic here!
I give you points for your dialogues! You can make your characters having deep and meaningful conversations without it sounding unnatural and forced; you use several layers of speech that gave to each character its own identity. *is impressed*
I get what you mean by 'jumps'; Naruto realising that he was in love with Gaara maybe would have need a bit more development (but that's just because I'm a huge NaruGaa fan and needs more NaruGaa moments!). Still, it's a minor thing and does not detriment from the flow of the story.
Not too late for the NaruGaa Valentine Love Fest Thingie! (offically ending on march, the 14th)... can't wait for your next NaruGaa story! |