Nice. Very nice!

Keep up the good work!

O-kay.. i find it quite disturbing and funny at the same time that naruto did that with a clone. but despite that i liked the story and how it ended with naruto and hinata being together.

Lost this after I found it. Devil of a time trying to remember anything related to the summary or title. But that's my fault. I really liked it. The living clone bit has been done by others, but really yours is the most believable one I've seen. Good work.

So, it's a really good story, and it's interesting and a lot of fun.

But. It's totally not canon at all. Chapter 100 showed us that:
1) Regular Shadow Clones have chakra coils.
2) The Byakugan can't tell Shadow Clones from the original body. Maybe with some kind of enhanced ability, but not as itself.

This is a very well executed story. It's fantastic. I don't think I've ever seen a story as well developed as this one. The pace was immaculate, maybe a tiny typo here and there, but other than that, an outstanding job.

I wonder why I never found it before. Oh, and that's a hell of a plot bunny :D *Goes to check your profile in hopes of finding other wonderful bunnies* ^_^

Another awesome short. I read this months ago, but forgot to review, so I wanted to let you know that this was a fantastic, original idea that I thoroughly enjoyed. Beyond that, the characters were handled well, and it was a great read.

wow lovely and sexy great 5-5

This was great!! It was touching and it showed real emotion. I laughed with Ino and Sakura when I saw the pattern. Overall it was a touching and sweet story.

Great story keep it ^

lmfao

GREAT CHAPTER

This is pretty cool. The banter between Naruto and his clone in the beginning feels like something I would write. I mean that in the best way possible.

you have done something that no other fan fiction writer on this sight, ney the world! has done, you actually mad me feel the emotions, the hurt the betrayal the confusion, even the love i thank you for that, this was just the best story ive ever laid eyes on 10/10 bravo, excited to read more of your work if its anything like this

Oh god you're a freaking genius! Amazing I say, amazing! Greatest one-shot ever!

Gross, but hilarious all the same! But wouldn't Naruto's clone's memories of getting screwed return to Naruto? That can't be good for the mind. I thought Ino and Sakura spying on them was hilarious, update soon!