 Divinely Ethereal 2009-11-10 . chapter 12Another cute one-shot; loved the coffee theme, though something tells me that Hwo would soon be graduating from the school of coffee and joining the institute of beer and spirits and street dope, much to Julia's chagrin, lol.
Keep them coming!
¬Happy Writing! |
 TeaC0sy 2009-11-09 . chapter 12Oh Lord knows how mcuh I love this chapter. COFFEE! COFFEE! And MORE COFFEE! I'm actually drinking Irish Cream as we speak. Heavenly.
~The rain soothes me. Just looking at the silver droplets of heaven fall from the sky one my one made me want to crash on my bed and just dream, dream, dream away. - Really like this line :D
~You aren't over-dramatic like Steve. - LOL I don't know why, but this made me laugh more than I perhaps should have. XD
And of course: "Coffee is definitely the best beverage. Ever. And I'm not counting why." - straight up.
Coffee, Hwoarang and Julia (in that order - lol) makes for a great fic! Almost reminds me of my own :) Really nice write Sei!! :D |
 Razer Athane 2009-11-07 . chapter 12'You were no mystery to me. You aren't enigmatic like Jin. You aren't over-dramatic like Steve. You aren't even responsible like Lars. You know, you were just Hwoarang. Just Hwoarang. The caffeine-addicted guy that still falls asleep in classes. Strange.' - Adorable X3
'You? Rock. Red, to be precise.' - RED! 8D! "Hey you // Look what you do to me // You bend and you bruise me~" NOW I MUST LISTEN TO THEM AGAIN XD
“I dunno,” you said with a shrug and a grin. “I dunno what I love more: the coffee or you.” - KYA! -fangirls-
Epic as always :3 -salute- |
 SeungSeiRan 2009-11-06 . chapter 12*swoons*
“I dunno what I love more: the coffee or you.”
Thank you so much! I wasn't expecting an early Birthday present (it's on the 8th) so I log on to FF and see that one of my favorite authors has updated... and it's dedicated to me... and it's Hwoa/Jules... and 'coffee is the best beverage ever'...
Thank you, Sei. I can't package a real hug so a virtual one will have to do *HUGS*
Thank you :) |
 SeungSeiRan 2009-10-27 . chapter 11Damn, I've missed out on a lot. Especially considering that the last chapter was Steve/Julia D:.
Oh my God, Sei, you did not just write THAT about Jin's keychain! And Leo wears a SKIRT!! :O. But still so adorably true to heart and believable as always. Never knew that Jin/Leo could go down so well in my book :) |
 Divinely Ethereal 2009-10-25 . chapter 11Lol, that was... strange. I never would have guessed the pairing. I mean Jin.. with a carving of a **... frigging hilarious...
"Dad, cat!" For some reason that made me lol.
Wait, Leo wearing a skirt? Did I read that right? 0.o
Ending was cute. Update soon!
PS Can we have some JinxLili? Pretty please? I fear that I'm really growing attached to that pairing ^_^ |
 TeaC0sy 2009-10-23 . chapter 11~Fight or flee.
Fight.
“I have...” I began. “I have something to tell you.”
You were still grinning. “I'm listening.”
I hoped from the bottom of my heart that the road would continuously stretch and stretch the farther and farther we walked. Trust me. This is truly better than any and every dream I had about you.
That was my favourite part. Honestly. Adorable oneshot. And I LOVED the character choice! :D Great stuff~ |
 Razer Athane 2009-10-23 . chapter 11SEI-I-I, I'm sorry I missed you on MSN Messenger, Dad was friggin hogging my computer! We miss you too :3
This was really sounding like Kazuya (who I KNOW it is) until this part: “All the more I should ask him to ride with us!”. All I could think of then was Baek XDXDXD
“DAD! CAT!” - XD
“By the way...” Father went on. “That thing hanging from his bag... Was that a varnished wood carving of a **?” - LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL WTF?! WIN!
WOAH WOAH WOAH BACK UP. LEO? JIN THE BOY? THIS HAS TOTALLY FLIPPED MY PERSPECTIVE OF THE ONESHOT! I like it. But you can see what I was thinking of originally (Hwo/Jin XD).
'stretch the father and farther we walked. ' - Spelling error! Fix first 'father' into 'farther' like you want :3
Adorable as always X3 X3 X3~ Imagine if you did a Xiaorang. That'd be pwn. KEEP IT UP YOU! MISS YA! |
 Angle-Kira 2009-10-21 . chapter 10Nice story! I really enjoy reading your fictions =D
Hope you make more Hwoar x Lili fics ^^ |
 Adventure seeker 2009-10-01 . chapter 2Again beautiful shows that true stregnth comes from friendship. |
 Adventure seeker 2009-10-01 . chapter 1Beautiful, this chapter is sort of like poetry |
 all stars 2009-09-22 . chapter 8 Omg i love this chapter so much. so sad but it was beautiful." I'm 99.9 percent positive that he doesn't like me. But I'm still holding on to that point 01 percent chance that he's gonna love me too. We're gonna walk again, and when that time comes, we'll be holding hands all the way." aww loved it! poor xiaoyu! hope you keep on writing stuff like this! go xiaoyu!! more xiaoyu and jin please? hehe |
 Divinely Ethereal 2009-08-20 . chapter 10Hey, Sei ...Despite there not being any love lost between me and high school angst, I must say that I was completely blown away by this series. I especially enjoyed "Obsession"; it was lovely how it was all put together, though Hwo struck me as a stalker and his taste of music was outa character( Taylor Swift ROFL!), also the way Lili kept referring to him as her drug echoed Twilight's Bella saying Edward was her brand of Heroin*shudder*Umm, so I'm not really sure why I liked that chapter the best ^_^. Asuka failing classes and being all sugar hyper also struck me as being more of Xiaoyu's department, but never mind that, as i was going to say something about how i liked your sticking the older Tekken generation in one chapter. Baek is so psychic, he should take over from Jun XD. Him and Anna are cute. The pseudo-Yaoi chapter was unexpected but cute and giggle inducing, especially when Xiao was dumped like that... speaking of her, I thought she was your weakest character, being Emofied to the point of becoming a human hosepipe and cutting herself and all... Anyways, keep those one-shots coming! |
 TeaC0sy 2009-08-05 . chapter 10~If the ring was mine, I'd take it apart, keep the sapphire and throw away the ring for all I care. I'll let it burn in hell's fire 'til it melts. - I loved whole first section, but that bit really stood out. Awesome.
And. The last line was just amazing in that 'gimme more' way. "untouched and bubbling inside the glossy transparent bag, the carbonated topaz liquid slowly warming up and turning into moist." LOVE. Very nice piece. ^_^ |
 Razer Athane 2009-08-04 . chapter 10Read this on my phone, so glad to see you back, and the piece overall was very adorable :3
There's a spelling error though:
'...I'll be headed ti the comfort room...' - 'to', not 'ti'. 'Ti' is Greek for 'what' though XDXDXD LOL :P
Still... heart! |