That was so touching. Very realistic and IC.

Awww!

I actually said that aloud.

Awesome stuff. :D

That last line was a perfect way to end it.

The way you wrote this was great, it worked so well.

Brilliant!

Really really, extremly good! D

loved.

Oh! Poor Remus. I love your take on Sirius; finally, someone else on this site who realises his flaws as well! He's not perfect, but many a time insane fangirls forget that. I'm glad to see that you have a very realistic picture of Sirius. I enjoyed it, particularly the ending where they heard Remus transform.

You have a real gift for making a great story out of a few words! In 227 words, you made this incredibly clear situation come into my head, and that's saying something. You're very talented.

SiriuslySouthern

I liked it.

Aww, I liked it, short and sweet but you could see the friendship there, well done!

Haraldzidla