A great story. Very well written.

This is beautiful. I've been toying with writing an Isabella one-shot, but I'm nervous. This has inspired me. Thank you for writing.

well done! My favorite kind of fanfic!

congratulations.

I liked reading this very much. It was descriptive, in-depth and realistic to Isabella's character. I really only noticed a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but besides that you've done a marvelous job. I really only wish it had been longer.:)

Wow, this was really amazing! So sad, but so beautiful ... great job :D

Aw, that was really good.

I think you got Isabella's desperation down pretty much perfectly.

I've always felt sorry for her.

):

She really didn't deserve what she got from Heathcliff.

Congrats again.

xx