yes he asked her out!

cute chapter!

ahh man nate really needs to break it off with peyton! but its sweet that he doesnt want to hurt her feelings.. although it's better to have more bad things at once than have them keep on coming =P hope you update again soon!

poor peyton#nathan needs to come clean and having an affair is not helping
why does lucas say nothing?

loved this chapter. loved the naley. well this is going to be the start of drama. cant wait to see what happens next. update soon!

cute :) but seriously nathan should break it off with peyton! i never liked them in a relationship anyway. if thats what you could call what they had! =P update soon :)

so i just found this and ok nathan is kind of stupid for telling lies
peyton ( i mean every girl) deserves better (that includes haley by the way)
so do we get see more of peyton or is the break up and these few mentions all?
keep it up

HM! LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE NALEY AND THEIR DATE. BROOKE MADE ME LAUGH. I HOPE THAT NATHAN BREAKS THINGS OFF WITH PEYTON BEFORE SHE AND HALEY GETS HURT. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

LOVE THIS STORY AND CHAPTER. LOVE THE NALEY AND THE BRUCAS. WHY DO I HAVE THE FEELING THAT PEYTON IS GOING TO SHOW UP THERE. UPDATE SOON!

Great story! I hope you update this one soon too!

very cool. again :)
hope nathan gets the chance to break it off with peyton soon ;)

like the sounds if this so far

would be better if Nathan wasn't dating Peyton (LOL)

good job

its a good start. cant wait to read the next chapter.

like where this story is heading love to read more.

Great first chapter!
You could write more, though. This is great, I just think that you could include more thoughts and feelings maybe?
Please update soon!
Love, Jess.