That was the worst death scene I've seen so far for a fanfiction story. I liked Laurel along with other post boot Legion characters.

Found this one by accident. It's been a while since I've read anything about the Legion, though I've been a fan since '67. Very well written and thoroughly enjoyable! You've a wonderful sensitivity for the nuances of the characters. Kudos!

Bravo! It always stinks when good characters get killed off, and you were proactive and did something about it. May Jo and Tinya live happily ever after.