wow...
call me stupid but i just realized you also wrote The Ghost in the Machine after reading the A/N at the end of the chapter :P
you're brilliant!
I love how you made the plot of Detective Fiction...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~! XD

This is interesting. Well it's always a bit of surprise to find that you're not real.

I like you set this out with how Light started this unintentionally, etc. It's not your average crime story.

I enjoyed reading this, good work.

Wonderful! I love how you've tied almost everything together here in this chapter.
Only one more chapter? Really? Okay then, I absolutely can't wait!
I feel sorry for L, I'm wondering what will happen to him... and Light too at the end of the story.

Hoping inspiration finds you well,
Ember

Lovely lovely fic. Wish I had gotten my hands on it earlier though *pouts* Anyway, absolutely love it to bits! Too bad that L's not really real though. Anyway, update soon!

This is amazingly good! I love it! I'm kinda disappointed that it's ending so soon, but it's been great! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is excellent! I enjoy all the crossovers with the Death Note storyline. I love this!

This looks very intriguing! I like it!

Wow, sorry it took me so long to read/review this O.o

Firstly, I'd like to say, as ever, how much I enjoyed the update :D

Secondly: constructive criticism? I hope it's a good thing? Give a yodal if not, and I shan't bother you with it again (you know, until my amnesia kicks in ^^).

The references to canon Death Note made me smile (L's thoughts about them being chained together, for example. Oh! and how things occurs in fours, like B's play with numbers in the LABB murder cases :D), but there were quite a few of them, and a couple seemed gratuitous: “About as much as I expect you to believe in a notebook that kills people,” L replied with a shrug," for example. (Oh yes, and is it just me seeing Princess Tutu parallels? :D)

Also, you mentioned that Takada was killed before Light even invented Ryuk, but that B appeared only a few months after her death. Does this mean B was thought up before the first three books were written? That they were written really quickly? That I'm confused and should shtop talking? (likely xD)

Well, that was perhaps the most indepth and potentially irritating review I've written to date :)

That said, I'd like to stress again your awesomeness - details like the casual mention of there being people who will never let Kira rest, followed by the realisation of that as a couple such people come a-cropper of B @)

This is amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
/Nat

hm. this is pretty interesting actually. pretty cool concept haha. :D

I've just read all seven chapters in the last hour and your writing is amazing. I was a little apprehensive but this is written with such imagination and creativity that I've fallen in love with it.
-Luck with your writing, Christmas.

Lovely... The feel of the story is wonderful. Yet again, I'm blown away by the quality of your writing. I eagerly await the next chapter. :D
-Huma

Woho, that was cool *grins like the cheshire-cat* I just love your hard-to-believe twists... wanna see the ending :D I wish I could go to YaoiCon... but that's kinda not possible for I am Hungarian and live in Europe XD Have fun :D

Great update. I've missed this story. I'm really sad that you're so close to ending it, but it's been an awesome ride. I can't wait to see how everything gets wrapped up.

On a non gushy note, glad to have yu stateside, hop you like it here. ^^

He.

A villain really does make a story and B is one of the most awesome villains I've seen/read/watched. And, oh my poor Light. It must be bewildering to suddenly have characters come alive and blaming you for it. I suddenly remember Shelley and Frankenstein's monster. (By the way, OMFG, I love what B's name stood for...the very reason of the worst sociopaths=boredom.)

And yes, I can totally see the parallel themes and characterizations from Death Note. Which is all kinds of super-special-awesome.

Thank you, thank you so much for this chapter. It really gets me raving and wanting to write my own detective story. XD, if I do ever get the balls to write it out.