its good upgrrade soon ok

Ace fell off of his bed, instantly waking up. He looked around in confusion for a few moments before he realized what had happened. Once he realized what happened he realized some thing else: he had a boner.

Ace’s thoughts

‘shit. Falling for the little girl and having inappropriate dreams about her? Check. Yep, I really am one messed up bastard’

And with that he walked to the rest room.

Great start! (There was a mistake there, but I fixed it for you.) Keep up your awesome writing! :)

i loved reading this! was quite funny
n yea ace is pretty messed up
but i luv the ace and buttercup pairing
please update soon!

woah. nice beginning. rly intense. :D