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Insomniatic95
2009-11-03 . chapter 6
OMG! IT'S THE SEX TALK!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!
lmao! HILARS!
HimeHikari
2009-08-26 . chapter 7
I like reading how Neji and Tenten married life would be. Neji the overprotective father is very becoming *laughs*
hakuisagirl
2009-04-16 . chapter 7
cute
hakuisagirl
2009-04-16 . chapter 6
LOL
LOL
LOL
kitachiuchiha9573
2009-04-01 . chapter 7
whoa. i missed alot on alot!! SO ur nxt story is it on nejiten or their kids?
90MLLu
2009-03-26 . chapter 7
Funny way to end this story. I like the plot a lot. Super. Too bad this story has to come to an end. I like it(^v^)
90MLLu
2009-03-26 . chapter 6
This is so funny. Neji is really a stricht father.^Keep up the good work^^
90MLLu
2009-03-26 . chapter 5
Great chapter. The pranking part is very good indeed. I can really relate to this^^. Good job(^v^)
Karma Kat 281
2009-03-25 . chapter 7
Done already? So sad... I'll look out for Kimonos!
beckylovesgigs
2009-03-24 . chapter 7
lol hangover for Kaito, i think we've all been there at one point or another

teen- proofing, na never happened in my house and i still spend hours on the phone chatting to my mates about hte most random of stuff.

cant wait for the next chapter and i hope you enjoy spring break, i'm not on holliday untill april
TwilightRaver
2009-03-24 . chapter 7
aw. that was awesome! haha.
I'll be looking forward to "Kimonos". ^^

-TwilightRaver
Mysterious Bluerose
2009-03-24 . chapter 7
Oh no! The stories over T^T... I can't wait for "Kimonos" to come out :D

Neji is one awesome dad! Go Neji! Oh, Kaiu really doesn't mean anything... i kind of made it up :D I'm going to be putting up discriptions of all my Naruto OC's on my anime account "Tear.Drops.On.Blue.Roses" Once I get "My heart will Go on" up and running :D Keep up the awesome writingness of storyness!!

Your #1 fan,

Angie
Mysterious Bluerose
2009-03-24 . chapter 6
LOL! Neji reminds me of my dad! He told me I couldn't date until I was 18! yeah..right... I loved this one! I swear, i almost slapped my dad when he tried to give me the "Sex talk".

Awh.. Thanks KNO! You deserve the best reviews :D I'm going to read the next chapter now, btw, GO YOU for updating two chapters on the same day! I can bearly manage to get two chapters up in the same month XD

Your #1 fan,

Angie
StrawberrySmoothie99
2009-03-24 . chapter 7
Lool that was a funny pair of chapters, great way to finish the story :D
Great story!!
fresh paint
2009-03-24 . chapter 7
I love the little sake dipper xD Tis funny, tis funny. You should write more about him, nudge nudge. He's probably my favorite OC you've created.

And his name is awesome beyond compare, unlike that Yasu kid xD
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