I think it was excellent

and Yer for deffo write one from Cloud's POV

:)

Beautiful *-*, I totally think you should do on Cloud's PoV and continue the story. I'm in love with CloTi, but a little boring about their PoV, I don't like when they're OOC and etc, but yours was great! And really into character from my point of view, great job ^^

I would love to see Cloud's POV, 'specially where it seemed he changed at the end of the Tifa POV.
Please oh Please he is just tying to protect her from himself so to speak. He felt like he could not protect Aerith, so he distanced himself or something like that. *keeps talking to self*

^_^"

I really do love the fic. It is written very well. I love everything about it. 'Cept Cloud being cold to Tifa. *pouts* They need to make babies!

Pretty good, lots of potential to go somewhere with it.
Very emotional though, really reads like someone's biography :x
The story's passionately wrote i guess, but too passionate imo for a tifa/cloud story.. sry :<

Too many rhetorical questions too..and cloud's evil for not choosing Tifa :<

Hope this is not the end of Tifa's PoV, or the overall story..
Good job =)

OHh wow. I have to say, Very very strong.

:] Love it!

It shows how Tifa felt about Cloud and how their relationship was.

Beautiful.

So many questions...they all sound rhetorical..
So many thoughts...they all sound emo...
Sounds like a lot to cover in such a short...diary.
I dun think it's a "bit" emotional, more like [BOLD] EMOTIONAL [/BOLD]

Pretty emotional...lol hope that didn't reflect your past XD... God knows this has happened to my life =p anyways other than the soldier mistake, pretty good story overall. =]

i love it -3-"
i love how that Cloud said that he doesn't CARE or LOVE her
it so sad but it so good! like it at the pont she getting crazy like doesn't know what she should do or w/e >

FRIGGIN GOOD. reminds me of that official? unofficial? story that i read a long time ago about Tifa/Cloud/family and backgorund info before Advent Children.

NOSTALGIC. THIS IS SO NOSTALGIC. omg.. i want to play the games, watch and write about ff7 again.. i miss ff7.

But this is really good. its very powerful, because i guess u put alot of emotion into it. And its also poetic because its not like ur describing things happening. I love literature and this is more like literature style.

I love it. its simple, its good. IT's nostalgic.

Keep this stuff up. i think u should write more like this.

Tifa is emo.