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Reviews for: Close to the Source
Louise 12/14/09 . chapter 1
Simply Fantastic! your writing is very beautiful!
TheGryfter 8/16/09 . chapter 1
Terribly sneaky of Clark... it's so cool!
Mark C 3/14/09 . chapter 1
It figures that this Valentine's Day would be hard on Clark. I guess things happen for reason and he might have found that out when Lois suddenly reappeared at the Planet. She did lift his spirits until finding out that she would be going back to Star City. I found it funny that Clark was actually the cause of this because of his recent 'hero' activity there.

The touching part of this story was when they both said that they would miss one another when Lois left once she got some things to take with her. Nice touch there.

The ending was great when Clark did his thing and he listened in on Lois when she made a decision to stay in Metropolis a bit longer because of a recent Red and Blue Blur sighting.

Good job.
1eclecticreader 3/4/09 . chapter 1
Thank you, I absolutely needed that. Even if it wasn't romantic, Clois interaction beats nothing. I really enjoyed reading this story. I appreciate you sharing it with us here.
Dannie Tomlinson 3/3/09 . chapter 1
Wonderful Clois! Oh how I've missed it. It sucks to be sick. :( Loved the fic, can't wait for more! :)
Mysterious Prophetess 2/28/09 . chapter 1
I loved this story. It was very well written.

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Kairan1979 2/28/09 . chapter 1
Clark using Red and Blue Blur to convince Lois to stay - that's something new!
rockyshadow 2/27/09 . chapter 1
I don't think green will ever be one of his favorite colors since that's kryptonite's color, so that part where he was glaring at that balloon was funny. I love how he missed her and needed her around. He's still in denial about how important she is, but she is the reason for almost moving. The Blur's rescue while she was on her way out of Metropolis at least convinced her to stay.
acacia59601 2/27/09 . chapter 1
Wow, great little Valentine's Day fic! I liked it!
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