 Manabishi 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Hi!
This made me feel... good -and awake again xD-
I love your style, it's so easy to read (L) and the description of how Alfred felt all the while, and his thoughts about being a hero-that was sad t-t
When did he become so important to world affairs anyway? Alfred only wanted to be his own man, his own country. He wants to be a hero, too, but he is failing at that spectacularly. In the end, he knows it is his own fault that he is so annoyingly necessary to the world. ->I love this paragraph. I can imagine him thinking that, and feeling the weight of being so important to the other countries..
The end was...(L) *can't think of words again =_=
And thank you for the historical notes, I have new information now : D
Take care~ |