 softdreamer 2009-11-27 . chapter 2it's hilarious XD
please continue |
 Lil-lo 2009-11-23 . chapter 2YAYS for this chapter! I love Tsunade and her super mad tackle skills! And then when she got Naruto's wallet...priceless.
The Jev. Witness thing was too funny too.Granted your real life Mormon story was really really funny, I liked how Sasuke was with Naruto as they scratched the tickets off.
I'm curious now about Naruto saying no authorities knowing about his father and Hinata and Tsunade's conversation at the end. It sounds like a great plot and I hope you plan on continuing this |
 BetweenBlueLines 2009-11-22 . chapter 2Wow, great story! I can't wait to read more, so please update soon ;) |
 Kichi Penn 2009-11-11 . chapter 2ha!
update soon, please! |
 Kichi Penn 2009-11-11 . chapter 1Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Naruto's so funny. ^^ It's the kind of thing he'd do. |
 Hallucinating Skys 2009-10-31 . chapter 2'Says his name is shish-kabob or something'
I chose the wrong moment to drink water, haha . update ! |
 sher162252 2009-10-30 . chapter 2Haha, I love it... It is so funny, Naruto trying to be a criminal.. That is like him being evil.. I can't wait to read more.. Thanks for writing it :D :D :D |
 xBunni 2009-10-26 . chapter 2Glad to see an update, really looking forward to this fic's progress~ ^__<)b |
 Vicsy 2009-10-21 . chapter 2 I love the sense of humor in this fic. It's so funny. I especially like how no one can quite catch on to pronouncing Sauske's name. Plus I see plot! Can it get better than this? Can't wait to read more. |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-04 . chapter 2Really great work. I hope you continue this! |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-10-04 . chapter 1Really good! |
 Liviania 2009-09-28 . chapter 2Like the real world story. ^_^
Also, I hope you continue with this crack. It's awesome. Naruto is the worst robber ever - and Sasuke was being rather nice, considering.
Livi |
 LykeOmgz 2009-09-27 . chapter 2Moar plz! :D |
 AlchemyGaara 2009-09-25 . chapter 2My friend wanted me to help next time religious peopel came to their house and i slept over by both of us answering the door and pretending to be naked under bed covers hugging. XD
Oh, good times. Good times.
Those bastards woke me up at 7 in the freakin morning!
~Noah |
 RasalynnLynx 2009-09-22 . chapter 2Crap Naruto can't commit a crime worth his life. This is hilarious. Can't wait to see what happens. |