 DreamBeamz 2009-08-13 . chapter 1I like that she still had a bargaining chip, cutimous :) |
 miss anonymous 2009-07-09 . chapter 1 Very cute. I loved it. The characters were spot on and the dialogue amusing. I'll be looking for that sequel you promised.
-Miss Anonymous |
 takara410 2009-04-01 . chapter 1love it |
 LDeetz 2009-03-03 . chapter 1That was so cute! But unfortunately, you know your readers will want to read about the pizza and a movie now, don't you? ^_^; |
 Gothic-Romantic99 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Aww, so sweet. You remain true to the characters and add a great amount of depth to them. I especially like how well you characterize Jareth by showing him as more than what Sarah beleived him to be, mostly by making him have a soft spot for the puppies. Also I like how you show his feelings towards Sarah with that line, "but it's my kingdom, and I won't have you smashing anymore magic mirrors or breaking anymore thousand-year bridges." Or hearts." I also like how you have Sarah realize the way she treated and made assumptions about Jareth was wrong. The ending is adorable, "What could a King possibly want?". Great job, very creative. |
 2009-03-03 . chapter 1 Aww, so sweet. You remain true to the characters and add a great amount of depth to them. I especially like how well you characterize Jareth by showing him as more than what Sarah beleived him to be, mostly by making him have a soft spot for the puppies. Also I like how you show his feelings towards Sarah with that line, "but it's my kingdom, and I won't have you smashing anymore magic mirrors or breaking anymore thousand-year bridges." Or hearts." I also like how you have Sarah realize the way she treated and made assumptions about Jareth was wrong. The ending is adorable, "What could a King possibly want?". Great job, very creative. |
 Ayjah 2009-03-01 . chapter 1lol what a great story :) |
 kokoronagomu 2009-03-01 . chapter 1*chuckles*
great banter. she's going to have to learn to take the mirror though.
♥ |
 GitaMerah 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Hahaha! She stole his necklace?!? Brave girl.
Anyway, great job. Wish there was more. |
 Athena's Avatar 2009-02-28 . chapter 1Lovely and fun - great characterization! |
 notwritten 2009-02-27 . chapter 1This is very interesting. Thank you for sharing it today. Have a cool weekend. So keep smiling. :-) |
 magialuna 2009-02-27 . chapter 1I love this! So sweet... I love their relationship.
-Clare |