Cute :)

I'm working my way up to the the heavier reading, srsly, I just love fluff. That whole ending sequence made my face go like this W and this 3 and eventually like this *U*

Not to mention that puppies are the best.

heheheh... adorable.

I love it.

I like that she still had a bargaining chip, cutimous :)

Very cute. I loved it. The characters were spot on and the dialogue amusing. I'll be looking for that sequel you promised.

-Miss Anonymous

love it

That was so cute! But unfortunately, you know your readers will want to read about the pizza and a movie now, don't you? _;

Aww, so sweet. You remain true to the characters and add a great amount of depth to them. I especially like how well you characterize Jareth by showing him as more than what Sarah beleived him to be, mostly by making him have a soft spot for the puppies. Also I like how you show his feelings towards Sarah with that line, "but it's my kingdom, and I won't have you smashing anymore magic mirrors or breaking anymore thousand-year bridges." Or hearts." I also like how you have Sarah realize the way she treated and made assumptions about Jareth was wrong. The ending is adorable, "What could a King possibly want?". Great job, very creative.

Aww, so sweet. You remain true to the characters and add a great amount of depth to them. I especially like how well you characterize Jareth by showing him as more than what Sarah beleived him to be, mostly by making him have a soft spot for the puppies. Also I like how you show his feelings towards Sarah with that line, "but it's my kingdom, and I won't have you smashing anymore magic mirrors or breaking anymore thousand-year bridges." Or hearts." I also like how you have Sarah realize the way she treated and made assumptions about Jareth was wrong. The ending is adorable, "What could a King possibly want?". Great job, very creative.

lol what a great story :)

*chuckles*

great banter. she's going to have to learn to take the mirror though.

Hahaha! She stole his necklace? Brave girl.

Anyway, great job. Wish there was more.

Lovely and fun - great characterization!

This is very interesting. Thank you for sharing it today. Have a cool weekend. So keep smiling. :-)

I love this! So sweet... I love their relationship.

-Clare