...need...update! The other stories I've been reading have been finished, so your my only hope! Please update soon! :)

Yes, yes, and yes!
This is great!
Thank you so much for the new chapter!
Keep it up please. :)

Nyah~ I love this so much! ^^ I noticed your grammar got better as the chapters led on, and that's very good! ^^) I hope you continue this! :D

really good please update soon

Yatta!! You updated! The Fighting was really good in this chapter, and the ending just leaves me waiting to find out the conclusion.

So glad you were finally able to update! I loved the fighting scenes in this chapter. Keep it up!

Wow, I just love the Batman cartoons/movies, and I'm really enjoying Brave and the Bold right now. That's why I got so psyched when I saw your story! I think you're doing really well, and have a great plot. The only thing I can reccomend is that you use more descriptions. Like, as soon as I heard that Kristen had gotten her costume I couldn't WAIT to read what it would look like. Sadly...You never told us. =( Or at least if you did, I didn't see it. Anyways, I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter! ^^ Keep up the good work! ^^

hehe, is it me or does everyone in world understand teen love except the teenagers themselves?

Nice chapter though, it really felt like an episode. You seem to understand the Brave and the Bold world pretty well, congrats! I know I'm going to sound like a predictable fangirl right now but man I kinda would like to see even more jaime/kristen scenes. Hehe, once again I just had to say it. Good luck with the rest of the story and update soon!

Awsome! I story about a real person meating Batman. I wish it would happen to me! And Robin/Dick grayson be there too. My name is Kristen too and i like Batman. How wierd.

not to be mean, but this story is kind of hard for me to read. it seems a bit unoriginal. i like chapters that are longer and more fleshed out. i also prefer if the author has described the setting for me, as i like to see the story, as it unfolds. that's kind of hard for me to do, when I don't know where it is. Please try not to write run on sentences. other than this twiddle, i'm enjoying the story so far, and will read more soon. -13yo

Hey, great story so far! Mystic Lass...why is it not surprising that Aquaman would say such a thing? By the way, in the comics Blue Beetle meets a girl named Traci Thirteen (someone who works with magic known as Traci 13). There could be some tension there but, seriously what you have here is great. Keep up the good work (perhaps though, using the enter button on some of the dialogue could help clarify who is speaking). Update soon!

Mystic Lass? Only Aqua Man could come up with a name like that.
So far it's a good story.
Could you break up your writing more? It can be difficult to read long paragraphs. Breaking big paragrpahs into smaller ones makes it easier for the reader to read the story.

Update soon!

-Blackwolfwarrior

*giggles* Mystic Lass *Laughs* But I like the name mystic.

I don't really watch Batman that much, but this fanfic got me interested! Write more... PLEASE!

*smiles* Keep up the good work.