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Liooness
2009-04-22 . chapter 2
hehe, that was cute, and like how you got them together at the end. no tokka angst, just suki. =)
ThumperMiggles
2009-04-21 . chapter 2
You know what?

I like it too.

Pretty eyes!

Yep, that's Toph. Gah.


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I want pretty eyes too D:
Divokoza
2009-04-12 . chapter 2
It's great, the word jealous seem to appear often :D
Rand0mV1rus
2009-03-26 . chapter 2
Jealous much?

Suki: I said I'm not jealous!

Me: Right.

(Suki jumps behind me and wraps her hands around my head)

Suki: I could kill you right here and now.

Me: ... You wouldn't.

Suki: Try me. (tightens grip)

Me: Okay! You're not jealous!

Suki: (lets go of me)

Me: You're REALLY jealous. Taxi! (Gets in a taxi and drives away)

So long, sucker.
TrueThinker
2009-03-26 . chapter 2
"She always kept her emotions under check. Sokka had a girlfriend in the north? That was fine she understood that their relationship had been a special one."

You should probably say "kept her emotion IN check" and you could perhaps put a semi-colon after 'fine'. It would just look better.

Other than that, though, I liked this one. Suki angst FTW.
Opaul
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
no idea for ending. I think I might stick around for this fic. I it suits me...wait...
ThumperMiggles
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
It's a great ending. :)





Really.

Now write another chapter >:(
Divokoza
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
Again, I suck at reviewing, but I just need to do it :D

I liked it!
RikaToruh
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
I'm too lazy to log in but, I thought you were going somewhere along the lines of Toph being offended because she COULDN'T look at him. Being blind and all...
I guess that's my suggestion.
-Mandi (Toruh)
TrueThinker
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Wow. Okay, just wow. I cracked up. 'Course, now Zuko seems all gay to me, but still XD
Super Reader
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
I love it. It's funny and very original. Who would have thought that Toph Bei Fong would have loved making photographers miserable? ;) Nice job.
Lady Sichi
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Ahh! That was absolutely brilliant! Haahaha...Toph's ass...NICE. :)
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