 Liooness 2009-04-22 . chapter 2hehe, that was cute, and like how you got them together at the end. no tokka angst, just suki. =) |
 ThumperMiggles 2009-04-21 . chapter 2You know what?
I like it too.
Pretty eyes!
Yep, that's Toph. Gah.
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I want pretty eyes too D: |
 Divokoza 2009-04-12 . chapter 2It's great, the word jealous seem to appear often :D |
 Rand0mV1rus 2009-03-26 . chapter 2Jealous much?
Suki: I said I'm not jealous!
Me: Right.
(Suki jumps behind me and wraps her hands around my head)
Suki: I could kill you right here and now.
Me: ... You wouldn't.
Suki: Try me. (tightens grip)
Me: Okay! You're not jealous!
Suki: (lets go of me)
Me: You're REALLY jealous. Taxi! (Gets in a taxi and drives away)
So long, sucker. |
 TrueThinker 2009-03-26 . chapter 2"She always kept her emotions under check. Sokka had a girlfriend in the north? That was fine she understood that their relationship had been a special one."
You should probably say "kept her emotion IN check" and you could perhaps put a semi-colon after 'fine'. It would just look better.
Other than that, though, I liked this one. Suki angst FTW. |
 Opaul 2009-03-02 . chapter 1no idea for ending. I think I might stick around for this fic. I it suits me...wait... |
 ThumperMiggles 2009-03-01 . chapter 1It's a great ending. :)
Really.
Now write another chapter >:( |
 Divokoza 2009-03-01 . chapter 1 Again, I suck at reviewing, but I just need to do it :D
I liked it! |
 RikaToruh 2009-02-28 . chapter 1 I'm too lazy to log in but, I thought you were going somewhere along the lines of Toph being offended because she COULDN'T look at him. Being blind and all...
I guess that's my suggestion.
-Mandi (Toruh) |
 TrueThinker 2009-02-28 . chapter 1Wow. Okay, just wow. I cracked up. 'Course, now Zuko seems all gay to me, but still XD |
 Super Reader 2009-02-28 . chapter 1I love it. It's funny and very original. Who would have thought that Toph Bei Fong would have loved making photographers miserable? ;) Nice job. |
 Lady Sichi 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Ahh! That was absolutely brilliant! Haahaha...Toph's ass...NICE. :) |