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Dozer
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
That was great! Inever expected that.
coldwell
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
You caught me with that one, I never thought it was Splinter.
It is so nice to read something, written by someone more, shall we say "mature". I get tired of these "kids" who don't know the difference, between then & than, their, there, or they're, of and off, and several more like that. I know my punctuation is garbage!
My college English professor and I used to have arguments, because we could not agree where to put commas. Thanks! It was nice starting the day with a laugh! S.K.C
Pirates Sparrow and Turner
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
DAMN! This one definitely takes by surprise and is so cute! Thanks for a truly delightful read!! =)
The Royal Frog
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
XD Very cute.
innocent-rebel
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
Dude I was so convinced it was Raph at first! Especialy with the whole HE can smell the air thing. I thought that was Raph thinking about Splinter, but it was Splinter thinking about Mikey!! That is just awesome and this is made of win! Poor Splinter! His son is so worried for his health! Yet twinkies must never be denied!
Mikey's Kunoichi
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! That was Excellent, Cynlee! I was honestly expecting it to be Michelangelo or Raph sneaking in with something, but SPLINTER through me for a loop!
Saru Wolfe
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
This is so cute! I love it. That's one nice twist at the end there.

Question: How do you type in the TM thing after the Twinkies?

Keep it up!
Doppleganger
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Haha! Enjoyed the surprising turn of events there. I didn't expect it to be that one and I was pleasantly surprised to see it wasn't who I expected. Keep up the good work and hopefully things are well with you. Take care!
shadewatcher
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
lol omg that was seriously unexpected and too freaking cute. ^_^ i so thought you were talking about Raph and his beer again. Splinter and Twinkies, i never saw it coming. too funny.
Lilandriss
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
LOL! Totally didn't see that one coming. Great little drabble!
Dozer
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
I loved your story. At first I thought the food was a burger or something from a fast food place. I never really thought about things you can not eat.
VGiselleH
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Oh, good one! XD To be honest I knew it wasn't going to be one of the turtles...too obvious, but I was actually betting on Klunk until it said he held his "treasure" against his chest, then I got all kinds of confused :p
WebMistressGina
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
Hilarious!

I seriously thought it was at first Donnie, then Mikey, and finally said, "Oh of course. It's Raph!" Nearly busted laughing in finding that it was actually Splinter.

Just...hilarity!
Nineteenth Souljah
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
That was cute and funneh. :) Now I want Twinkies too.
54Viruses
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
I have to admit, I figured it wouldn't be Raph but I was completely caught off guard by Master Splinter XD Great!
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