 teenbalto 2009-11-02 . chapter 1realy liked your story! 9/10 :D<3 |
 Love Robin 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Fun times!
I actually saw the aftermath coming. Though I half-expected to see at least one of the henchmen with a face-full of booger-rag...
T'was not the "typos" during Kim's dialogue that caught my eye - I too tend to type out accents and such - but the scattered few elsewhere...
All in all, a good job. |
 noncynic 2009-02-28 . chapter 1Horror of Fang Rock comes to mind, yes. Good story, one misspelling you probably didn't mean: when Sheki runs upstairs to check on KIm, should take stairs 'two' at a time. ALmost perfect, but that little missing 'w', lol. |
 MissDemeanorX 2009-02-28 . chapter 1This was so cute! you're writing's great as always. looking forward to your next fic:) |
 teriyakiskater 2009-02-28 . chapter 1yes! sick as a dog but still kicks **. |
 Invader Johnny 2009-02-27 . chapter 1I take it that Kim and Shego are gonna have sex huh?
How the hell did a VERY sick Kim beat the crap out of those ARMED guys is anyone guess.
I guess only you would know huh?
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 List of Romantics 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Backless and Strapless: I believe you've just described a small dish towel held on with double stick tape ;-)
"Stanstanistan" LOL! F-ing priceless! Though I shouldn't laugh, with my luck, god'll probably curse me and ship me off to an airbase in that sh*thole! LOL!
It's genius as always, Humbug. I'm jealous.
You certainly like the HOTNESS of Sheki and Kasy ;-) |
 Progos 2009-02-27 . chapter 1*applause*
The only error I can find: "taking them to at a time". Your 'W' key being troublesome? |