This was amazing :) Please update soon!

Wow, never known the true cuteness of Grub 'till now. LOL. Awesome chapter! Good luck with the NaNoWriMo, and update soon!

omg that was so good. that was..that was...-bursts into hysterical sobs- so GOOD!

i like this story and i know the answer to the second question! ARIEL THE LITTLE MERMAID! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I WIN!

Good luck with the NaNoWriMo thing. :)

Anyway, great story!

Keep going.

~HMF

typical grub... well same as alwasy, good chapt. yes, yes yes... (i seem to not be able to not give criticism usually, as i can't find criticism... tht's just me i guess.. well update asap. :)

Hm... they should meet Root. And he should blow a gasket, near-fataly.

I love this story! One of the best Artemis Fowl ones that I've read in a long time. I think that it would be great it Arty and Holly met Root, perhaps. I'm not really sure how they should react, though. XD Keep up the good work!

I love this! It's so well written. Keep going and update soon!

Root! Gotta be.
Love it, and god luck with NaNoWriMo and the exams. Update asap?!
Liris
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Hmm. Oh I dunno... Someone important... Wait. Caballine! Unless she already has...

I don't know about the crown but ursula is the sea witch from the little murmaid. good story.

this was a good chapter and i aqm glad you updated so soon. But uh when do we get to see the romance between the human the elf cause i know that it will come soon.

update soon
your loyal fan,
Knight-Bishop

Yes! Hopefully this one will go through!
Personally, I like Logan 1047's ideas about who to see and what their reactions are. In fact, everything Logan 1047 is true. About Wolf as well. -gives pointed look-
I take it that Holly agreed to be Artemis's partner? This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~

Commander Root: Surprise, Fear
Councilman Cahartez: Surprise, Fear
Wing Commander Vinyaya: Surprise, then coming to conclusions about Fowl and Shorts "relationship"
Sorceress Ursula: Unintimidated, forced into returning Holly's Magic
Foaly: Surprise, A bit betrayed
Mulch: Eating something, then he drops it in shock when he see's them.
Trouble Kelp: Chokes on his lunch and does something...

That is all I can think of, update soon, and wat the heck is the answer to that riddle story you made? Wolf is...Who?? Update that one as well.