ToT no

tenten don't go

wah why

^^
i added this to my fave and alert so keep updating pls

ohh i praise you

i haven't read a good nejiten for a while oh

i love this it sound really interesting and seductive

;)

hnn

i love this sempai!!

^^

I like this story.
Dotty

I like the story. It's really angsty and so far I'm not really into this new Tenten but the plots alright. Update soon :D

Panda.

I seem to recall you being very young...well, a couple of years younger than me at least, and I'm not very old. What I want to know is how someone that young can write something THIS sexy. Like seriously. It's smokin'. I was re-reading certain parts because the hotness commanded me to. You write badass Nejiten very well. (You write everything very well, rather.) The dialogue is fantastic - short, snappy, witty. The action is gripping. Basically this is just a great, sexy, entertaining read. You're awesome, babe.

wow i always read stories of neji being the jerk and the badass but damn tenten is on a roll here having neji wraped around her finger and all! XD
poor neji lol can't wait to read the next chapter

Depressive ... yeah, I suppose. Damn, I could use your talent for writing in my english test for the next couple of days .. urgh, I can't write stuff based on the school's prompt - it's way too structured! Anyhoo, great job as usual. I have to say, this new sort of Tenten is really cool. I could really imagine her being like that. GOsh, and Neji's slightly desperate character ... makes me kinda jealous. *sighs*. Looking forward to the next chappie. Is this only a three chap story?

Well that's a different kind of Tenten ... but she still rocks! Gosh, lip action already in the first chapter ... bold move Hyuga! *woot! woot!* Anyhoo, you rock! Your story rocks! I wish I could write like you! *sniffs*

Nice chapter, a very gripping story (:
I really like the idea of them being part of the yakuza. Ack, that punch must have been killer!
I enjoyed reading this very much, and i look forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter (:
Amb

YAY I like I like
update?

It was so sad. :( But I like it. The part about Sasuke at the end I did not see coming. It was fantastic!

Smexy.
Another hawt chapter.

o.O
AH NO!

1) She stills smoke
2) NO THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS OFF!

UP-DATE SOON!

aww, are you kidding me? That was incredibly awesome^^ I can barely wait to see the developement in the next chappie.
Oh, I totally loved that little "cut-in" from Sasuke. And the whole exchange ties thing?? Adorable in a really weird sexy kindofway, lol =3

xxburny.

This is captivating. Sorry for the romantic word... I can't think of anything else. XP