NUHHHHH! FINISH ITTTTTTTTTTT D:

I literally LOL'ed at the 'Score one for Jehanna,' line. XD

I like your style of writing. It's like, serious, but with humor added into it. Real Unique. I like it. XD

Okay, I LOVED this! It was so hilarious at some points, and this pairing is actually quite interesting! :) I just wish you had taken it all the way haha jk. The parts that made me lol was the part wher eyou mentioned Valter and the "me plus you plus bed equals sex?" That was amazing XD

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Kudos!

ChiyakoChan

I REALLY liked this. I absolutely love Innes, even if I generally despise him with anyone but Eirika (it's my favourite Fire Emblem pairing) I loved this. Although I was a little upset by the Ephraim/Innes hints, because for some reason I have an extreme dislike for Ephraim, the humour more than made up for that.

Favourite part: "Innes' response was like Dozla and Gilliam ramming into him at the same time. And then, just for added effect, Valter being there. Just there, because Valter himself was enough to destroy someone." Lol!