|Reviews for This Love|
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/30/10 . chapter 19
no. bella can't die
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/30/10 . chapter 18
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/30/10 . chapter 17
dun dun dun!
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/30/10 . chapter 16
this is one of my favorite chapters despite the fact that i despise weddings
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/30/10 . chapter 15
i should rewrite this chapter
| Zikare 8/28/10 . chapter 15
What's with the quotes at the beginning of every chapter? Truthfully, I skip them.
Why is Bella fawning over Emmett and his torn arm, when JASPER GOT BIT. That is the real injury...Poor poor Jasper sob
Bella broke Emmett and Rosalie up? What a home wrecker, Darwin! Well, at least they made up!
Why does Edward always threaten to run off to Volterra for suicide? Personally, if I were a suicidal vampire, I would douse myself in carosen, and light myself on fire...I think going to the volturi for death is more like sliting your wrists: you don't want to die, you just want the attention.
Yeah! Jacob imprinted on someone his own age and species, right?
BTW, this one was not that bad. It is def. better than ch.2
| Zikare 8/28/10 . chapter 14
Wait, you allowed Alice to be present during the Volruti fight? What if she gets hurt? Jasper will never forgive you for that! To risk her life for one supremely powerful humans?
Go Rosalie! She put Emmett's arm back on, right?
Jasper was biten! No! You should have just let Bella die...Not Jasper! Anything but that. DOesn't he have enough scars already?
Paul died? Awesome. There were WAY to many wolves in La Push anyway...
| Zikare 8/28/10 . chapter 13
So Bella is related to Eleazer? awesome!
LOL-with mind control
But, you should change I swear to god, to I wear to the Flying Sphaghetti Monster (in your A/N)
I like the super powers thing...
So, let me see if I got this right: Bella is a super power, and Aro wants her. But, Aro wants her in a fight? And this is the reason for the Cullen/Volturi showdown? I like it, but I still think my reason for a Cullen/Volturi showdown is funnier...Vampires don't lay eggs!
| Zikare 8/27/10 . chapter 12
Does making Bella lay an egg count as pregnant?
Oh, and I was confused about Zafrina visions. It seems like Bella says she can see them and then she cannot?
And what were the Egyptians doing in the bathroom? Do I even want to know?
| Zikare 8/27/10 . chapter 11
As dangerous as Jasper- LOL
I don't like Jacob here...He comes on too strong to fast and acts like an Einstein.
Some of the flow is choppy...like Edward and Bella are suddenly in a really intense relationship- sure it could happen, just add a paragraph saying it happened before they are all over each other.
And she remembers the scent bothers him from when she was little?
But, I like think reason for the Volturi war better than the Nessie reason
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/27/10 . chapter 14
awlalala. I can't wait to see what Zikare thinks
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/27/10 . chapter 13
the only reason i'm reviewing is so Zikare will have a chance in being the 300th reviewer
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/27/10 . chapter 12
edit this chaptuh
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/27/10 . chapter 11
you must must must must fix this chapter.
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 8/27/10 . chapter 10
you need to fix this chapter