I like your description of death...it was very good. It was depressing but that is good. To make it more depressing you could lenghten the description about all things morbid etc. But good, I do like the way you refer to each of the childrens' particular character traits. And the way you split it up into its bits :)

Always keep faith :)

AFO

ps-good to see a perception of the lead up to Shirley's birth :)

great chapter! glad you updated.

Very sweet but you might want to separate your stories into different bits...it can get a little confusing when everything is in together.

Lovely description and good characterisation of Jem...gosh, I love that kid :)

Always keep faith :)

AFO

update soon

thanks for updating! i was looking forward to it :)

stomach cramps? that's no fun. i hate them myself :(

heehee hint hint nudge nudge jack and Di!

yes, it would be nice for this chapter to have a little more depth...lovely that you have up dated though.

perhaps a few sentences could be worded a little better

and just in case you are wondering, i have most certainly not abandoned my precious story.

Always keep faith:)

AFO

Oh, are you foreshadowing a future romance between Di and Jack Wright? I hope so--I love the idea of them together.

Oh, this is your best chappie so far. I love it! Perfect.

This is a nice idea for a story and I'm looking forward to reading it.

I like the references to Di and Jack! Lovely, chapter, as always

~Petra

I am more and more interested in what is going to happen with Katherine and Pierce! I think it's simply sweet that Anne chooses Katherine as Di's middle name after her friend. Isn't she going to be surprised, though? :)

Oh, is the gift Anne is talking about the twins? How exciting!

What a comfy, homey, cosy chappie!

Davy is never going to grow out of his impishness, apparently. Are you going to include his courtship with "Milly" in this story? I know by Ingleside, he is married. I hope you do, I think you could do it justice!

All partings are so bittersweet, aren't they? I'm glad Owen has met with success in his career.

Everyone always forgets Anne's talents for writing--I'm glad you remembered.