Tetra's such a badass already. I can tell. :D

I have to sympathize with Link's mom. Having to say goodbye must be so hard!

I'm interested to know what that last scene could be setting up. Hmm, I think I have an idea.

Wow, Termina. Butthurt much? :p

These are the kind of chapters only you know how to do. You make Link and his family almost unbelievably realistic and personable. The interactions are real (straight down to Aryll's text messaging).

Get it, Ambi!

Oh no, what's gonna happen!

Link and his family are cute!

Well, you said feedback is appreciated. I have none to give, seeing as I'm a novice compared to you ^^; But keep it up! I want to see what happens next.

Termina sounds a lot like Naiz Germany.

good story so far, Keep up the brilliant work and update soon.

And now we have the history of the other side. Nice geopolitics.

Well, it was very descriptive, geographically and historically speaking. As for the birthday gift of a new chapter, thank you, even if it is a bit early lol.

Aw! Very cool!

I think we all can safely say that Hyrule is in some deep s-! Seeing Termina like that makes my heart swell in joy! I love their nationalism!