 Phaenilix 2009-10-10 . chapter 7Do I even need to mention how beautiful this story is? Fluff usually doesn't cut it with me. But this isn't the OMG SO SWEET YOU'LL ROT YOUR TEETH! But rather the WAFFs which make me want to cuddle to my pillow.
Much love,
Phaenilix |
 irmina 2009-09-12 . chapter 7So romantic! Love it! |
 irmina 2009-09-12 . chapter 4Delicious ice cream kiss, and sweet conversation about the past and sweet affection. Nice first date. |
 Ayotechnology 2009-07-31 . chapter 7As usual, you never fail to make a fan girl squeak with delight:) |
 XquidditchxbeaterX 2009-07-08 . chapter 7ah, such a warm ending.listening to coldplay, reading about one of my fav pairs, written by an excellent author, lol, i can't think of any other better activity.
this totally made me feel sweet butterflies in my stomach, because it was soo damn sweet!!almost made me squeel with joy.excellent work.these two deserve it soo much.
*happy sigh* |
 XquidditchxbeaterX 2009-07-08 . chapter 6i really like the park setting in the last scene, soo beautiful--nature, stars, moon, the lake, amazing company;how could i not?!
brilliance.XD |
 XquidditchxbeaterX 2009-07-08 . chapter 5i know very well the idea of losing precious things, since that happened to me too often.i can sympathize with kaname.hopefully, he'll find it.
lol, this whole chapter was soo surreal, i really enjoyed it, made me grin. |
 XquidditchxbeaterX 2009-07-07 . chapter 2aww, these two make such an adorable picture.or maybe adorably mouth watering is a better description.all dresed up and all.
i just wanted to hug them so bad, let my inner fan girl out. |
 SoulSaviour15 2009-07-06 . chapter 7aw quite lovely ur stories for zeroXkaname are amaazing |
 Paon 2009-07-05 . chapter 7tear...tear..
i loved this story. i am sorry to see it end but thank you for posting it. |
 ninemillionhigh 2009-07-03 . chapter 7In all, complete and utter honesty, I forgot that I was reading a fanfiction, and thought that I was reading a chapter from an actualy book.
This was that. Friggin. Good.
With mucho love;;
Emily(: |
 mlpbuttons 2009-06-22 . chapter 7So so good! I absolutely love this peaceful snippet in their life. These boys deserve it. =3
I am completely transfixed by your writing -- amazing is the only way to describe it. I can't wait to read the extra chapter! XD |
 Kitsune Demon Girl 2009-06-15 . chapter 7Hehe, very cute ^_^
I was slightly disappointed it wasn't another 30-something chapters that would take me several days to read, but it was still just as good as the other two :D
Will there eventually be a sequel to this too, or is it the end of this series? |
 Nineorchids 2009-06-10 . chapter 7That was so beautiful. I don't even know where to begin. I loved everything about it. The pendant, their thoughts and feelings, the way the danced together, everything! Babbles incoherently for several minutes. Finally gives up and sums up feelings in one sentence.
You are simply amazing. |
 VaneCaos 2009-06-10 . chapter 7Hi! *total apologetical look* I'm so horribly behind on reviews, I'm sorry *chagrin* I always read your chapter the very moment I see the alert on the mail, but I need a bit of time to write a coherent review in english and this is very sparse. Well, stop complaining and start reviewing!
First, I have to say that I was totally surprised to read a classical romantic chapter from you. Let me try to explain me. I was used to angst, passion, hate and romanticism in a rather dramatic way between the boys. But not to... how to say it? Tender or sugared romanticism? All stars, whispering and dancing slow songs in the night. It clashed a bit with the general mood I have associated to your KXZ fics, although really they two deserve a bit of that before you re open hell's door (or Pandora's box :D) in the next fic.
The necklace part was pretty much as expected: Zero all "oh no, I can't" and Kaname "I don't have any other person whom I love in my life but you". Yes, definetely, losing the necklace was a good thing, at least it helped to prepare Zero for the special gift he was going to receive: not specifically a necklace (although it's pretty valuous in itself) but the material proof of Kaname's love and the passport to consider himself as a legal part of Kaname's family. The part that I loved the most was that discussion about if they love each other because of the bond or if the bond helped to got them closer and forced them to know each other, so it was an opportunity to discover love. That doubt, that unsureness between them, is the essence of your KxZ fics, and part of the magic.
And *devious smile* I can imagine an humorous fic about Zero attending one of those horrible soirées (or a hunter's meeting) and accidentally activating the necklace images (I asume that anybody near him could see the images). Yeah, that will be funny to read!
*still giggling at Kaname enjoying his disco light like a child* It's always funny to see him laughing with simple things like that, and sad, too, because it gives us a measure of how strange and isolated his childhood had been.
*rolls eyes and tries to hide, feeling embarrassed for the clumsy picture they make dancing together* It was a great luck nobody was watching, because they will be laughing their heads off! It's strange, but for some reason its difficult for me to accept these Kaname and Zero dancing *scratches her head* Maybe because it's one of the first times you put them in normal situations? What I liked the most about the dancing part were the loving gibes they were exchanging, it's wonderful to see them comfident enough in their relation to actually laugh about it or about the picture they make together. It shows how many things and prejudices they have overcome.
*giggles* Of course, that situation (they alone in a desert park, at night, after an emotional gift and after dancing together) it could only end in a way *rolls eyes* Well, after reading your lemon (I know, I know, I haven't reviewed still), no wonder that Zero is dead asleep. I see that they have found a new level of intimacy, you always introduce a new element in the lemon scenes, dear, that's imagination :)
Well, I think that this date (and, this, this fic) was exactly what the boys needed at this stage of their lives to start recovering some of the time and things they have missed. Treasure you both, because I have the feeling will make you suffer again in the next fic! (and we, readers, are anxious to read it). |
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