That's so sad... but you were right. It's also sweet.

Very sweet

Ya know what you should put up more! this was great.

Hitomi

i loved it )

::sniff sniff:: That was so sad, yet so true! Poor Bulma and Chi Chi, forced to die first from old age. This was written very well. ::sniff sniff:: Very moving, well until another story, ja ne!

I LOVED IT! It is sooooooooooo heartbeaking! I started to cry because it was sad! I hope vegeta never forgets her because I think he writing I think that you are a great writer!111111

this was really sweet. i realize that you weren't going to make another chapter, but please do. this is wonderful.

*cries* that was just so sweeeeeeeet! Keep it up!*continues crying*_

That was very, very touching and incredibly well-written! :) I was close to crying, and that's always a good sign! ;) I enjoyed reading this work of fiction very much! !

*stares at the screen* *bites lip* ...i can't help it! *bursts out crying* that was so good! *cries*

Oh, so very sweet and romantic! You should continue with Vegeta's POV. How does he feel knowing that someday he will lose Bulma?

VERY SWEET! I lOVED IT..omg ur such a good writer -

Wow, this is very sweet; tender, well-written, and plausible to boot. Nice work.

this is washu the goddess on xan's name. that was so cute and makes you think of really how short of time they are together...WAAH!

Hey that was beautiful, I love stories like this one : )